HOME | DD
ARVEN92 — Chakra -B.O.T. Chapter 3 Cover
by-nc-nd
Published: 2013-12-01 16:31:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 45166; Favourites: 649; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Next:
Previous:
Read Chapter Two:
Read Chapter One:
-----------------------------------------------------
CHAKRA on Facebook: [link]
Join the CHAKRA-COMIC group!
-------------------------------------------------
Fiiinally. I promised you. And here it is.
The cover for the chapter that has just concluded, Chapter 3!
Congrats to everyone who guessed, the Hero to appear on the cover was indeed Orca!
This one took me a whole afternoon, but I was SO satisfied when I completed it^^
I imagined summing up the events of Chapter 3 in this picture. Orca surrounded by some Demons with the Destiny Sword in the background and a shadowy figure sneaking for it 
Anyway, I really hope you enjoy this cover, and the upcoming Chapter 4!
I am still working on the plot to change, I have the scene in my mind but it's taking me a while to find a way to synthesize it and put it on paper^^ Oh well, soon, soon!
Coloured Pencils on A4 Paper.
Several hours.
Characters and art (c)
I want to improve, I greatly appreciate feedback and constructive criticism regarding anatomy, page flow and overall composition. Thank you!
FREQUENTLY ASKED QUESTIONS
Like the comic? GET A COPY TODAY!
Related content
Comments: 263
I have only read up to this point in the comic, and so far, I can say the art is truly amazing! The fur is detailed, and the anatomy is, from what I can tell, correct.
The story does seem a bit rushed, things seem to happen too quickly. You killed off a character before we knew them enough to care, and now another goes out to adventure? As to this point in the story, I give it 5 stars in vision, as you have expressed the emotion of the characters in the art, 4 in originality (wolves are a rather common animal for art and stories...), 3 in technique, because the storyline is rather rushed and confusing, and 2 in impact, as we don't even get to know a character before something big happens
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh my, thank you so much for your critique!
I agree with your rating, this comic was definitely rushed, especially in the first two chapters. I evolved as a writer over the nine years I've spent working on this story, and I'm trying to make up for my initial mistakes in the later chapters
I do hope you find it an enjoyable read despite everything
Thanks again!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Haha, welcome! Sorry i'm so late on this response, i'm definitely catching up on the comic!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Not a problem! So glad to hear that
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I'm actually having a bit of trouble finding the comic part I left off on in your page. Is there a folder for it or?...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh sure!
I'm not exactly sure where you left off, but here is a folder with all of the pages 
Feel free to restart from the point you stopped reading
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
This my VERY first critique, so bear with me e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="
First of all, your light/shadow effects are very impressive, and they have improved immensely from the start of your series. The shadows on the ground and the light shining down from above on the sword is well done. I like how Jackal, assuming that is Jackal, is hidden in the shadow, approaching the sword, and I especially like the effect of his tiny, glowing red eye. I am curious though, to whom does that shadow in the middle belong to?
All in all, it is a great piece, very inspiring. It sums up chapter 3 well. However, I have a few issues, and they are mainly with the ram demon. Her size, compared to the others, especially the rooster demon, seems off. I got the sense from the other pages that she is supposed quite large, but here she seems too small. The other issue with her is that her horns do not seem thick enough. In this piece, they look less like the horns of a ram and more like the tail of a scorpion, too thin and floppy.
But besides these small issues, I really like this cover page. The best drawn characters are definitely Orca and the rooster demon. Their poses are very good, and their expressions are even better. You can really feel the tension by looking at them. Well, great job again and keep up the good work!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Ohoho my, thank you so much for this critique!
I'm so happy you like the effects I used for this cover
That's right! The wolf hidden in the shadow is indeed Jackal^^ And the shadow in front of Orca is cast by another Zodiac Demon, Hest
My, I see what you mean with Kozel, the ram demon XD She is indeed supposed to be bigger than that, I totally messed up her size there
And I also agree about those horns, I must make sure to give them more body XD
Truly thank you very much for your precious suggestions, I truly appreciate them! <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Can I translate all comics into portuguese?Can I translate all comics into portuguese?Can I translate all comics into portuguese?Can I translate all comics into portuguese?Can I translate all comics into portuguese?
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yes you can! Yes you can! Yes you can! Yes you can! Yes you can!
Just remember to leave a link to my page in the description of each page.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
So I wanted to ask one thing ... I could download, but I can not get it. And like that I'll translate if I can not download the comic book image!
And of course, I'll give you credits !!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Awesome! (Sorry for the bunch of favourites)
It just be my favourite cover so far! ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks so much! And for all the faves too!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You're very welcome! ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I'm already in chapter 3 and i'm ready to cry
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
i will read anything that is inspired by okami
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
must take a lot of devotion. i never finish anything lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I love working on these comics, ahahah XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
i can only draw when i specifically feel like drawing that one thing so thats why i start and never finish things lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I see what you mean, that can indeed be a problem when you're trying to finish things
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
i have a gift for that i promised her and has been in the same state since i first told her i was working on it and i'm kicking myself for not even getting it out again XD
I'll finish it later.....
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
Aww no worries, take your time^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
omg she messaged me saying that she saw that comment and i finished it faster then anyhing else XDDD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh my, I got this notification in my "Mentions", thank you very very much for your efforts, my lovely friend!! 
I am also struggling with motivation, it must be the rush of the New Year XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
OHSHIT I TAGGED YOU
OMG
I SWEAR I WILL WORK ON IT
i WILL post a WIP soon k so at least you can see the sketch
IM SO SORRY OMG XD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
i can only draw when i specifically feel like drawing that one thing so thats why i start and never finish things lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Hey Arwen, I wish to send you something: An avatar alter ego I made about you and your personnality with Devianart. I made characters and stories with inspiration from everything like people, place, people on web. I am still working on it for the color...
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
That's really kind of you! Of course you can
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
what pencils is this pic drawn with. Im very impressed by how this is seemingly all hand drawn
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I use Caran d'Ache Supracolor Soft colour pencils for all my works
And it actually is! Everything on this cover is hand drawn, including the title
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
At first glance, I thought that the title was written in Hylian. Heh.
Great draftsmanship and coloring went into this drawing. Good job. ^^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
This is a very well-done comic, I must say. I like the designs for the characters- they're cool, unique, and likable.
Very good job.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
You must have a lot of patience to do this traditionally. Very beautiful art, I'm impressed. You've really hooked me on these stories.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I'd say somewhere between 8-10 hours from start to finish
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
| Next =>