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Oh finally... X''D well... everyone know how this gonna end.. .right..? :'D Dont kill me please... I must do that... ;w; 1st chapter gonna have 3 or 4 more pages.. meybe I'll try to make it big so it'll be shorter... well, and after that my story start~ >:3
I tried my best with colouring... >w< hope you like it... ;w;
Just please tell me if Im drawing or doing something wrong.. ;w; I wanna do pretty comic... thank you~
So see ya guyz in next page!! >w<
I'll be happy if you like my page on fb!! link
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Comments: 7
HydragonofDeath [2020-07-19 21:10:33 +0000 UTC]
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MyKatzuki [2013-10-31 11:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is amazing.
You've drawn this well. Your style is extremely beautiful. Your concept of human anatomy is fantastic. You add your own twist to it, yet it's so accurate.
The way you draw hair is amazing. The different shades and strands is fantastic. I really love the flow of the brush.
I absolutely love the way you draw facial features. They're absolutely accurate, and beautiful. There's something unique about it yet it provides the picture with a great realism effect. I love how you draw eyes. They look very beautiful and the soft shading is effective. As for the nose/mouth, that's really good. It's hard to get that structure correct but you've got it accurate. I also like the blush on their cheeks. It shows how cold they are.
Brilliant job on the background. It's very accurate, and very pretty. The different shades, details and objects are fantastic. It makes up for a wonderful background.
I really like the ice. You've drawn that well, I can only imagine what will happen next.
Good story.
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JayaLaw [2013-10-19 19:10:15 +0000 UTC]
You're drawing well, and poor Jack!
The art itself is fantastic, with shading in the right places and excellent creation of depth, but pacing may be something to work on. The ice just cracks, and Jack's sister only says "I'm scared." There ought to be a panel with more reaction, when they both realize that they could drown easily, and then move on to the dialogue. But that's me nitpicking. I love this page
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Asano-nee In reply to JayaLaw [2013-10-19 19:13:58 +0000 UTC]
uwu thank you~ I'll try to make next one better ^w^
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JayaLaw In reply to Asano-nee [2013-10-20 13:20:31 +0000 UTC]
It's a good comic page, rest assured. Just trying to offer constructive criticism
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Asano-nee In reply to JayaLaw [2013-10-20 13:29:12 +0000 UTC]
^w^ and thanx to that I'm learning what I'll doing wrong and nest time I can fix it >w< thank you~
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