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Published: 2004-06-18 03:24:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 882; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 51
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I feel sick, I feel cheapI'm going crazy and I can't sleep
I've cried too many tears
For way too many years
And everynight to this day
I still hope and pray
That god will end this slow decay
Before I completely fade away
But I know that I'm slipping
And it's no one's fault but my own
Not even god can save me now
I'm in this all alone
-Ashley Carver
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you are NEVER alone and God can always help you because God will always Love you
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I used to feel that pretty much every moment of my existence.. I got out of most of the feeling, but I still doubt god a little.. i duno.. Nice job on the poems as usual -kia
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thank you, I really appreciate your kind words
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its good
but i think maybe you should go a little deeper.
what made you feel this way?
how do you feel, instead of what you feel.
you know what i mean?
more detail and more emotion could help this one.
either way, i like the rhyming you wrote in this one
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You are a wonderful writer, and manage to convey a great deal of emotion in so few lines. Absolutely wonderful.
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I need to read yours with a fast-paced air, but it's good.
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With every poem I read of yours, you are becoming my favorite poet.
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