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Published: 2004-05-01 07:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 878; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 35
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Version IIII'm sorry I'm a bitch
and I make you cry
I'm sorry I'm a whore
and I always lie
I'm sorry I make you cut yourself
and give you scars to remind you of me
I'm sorry I made you hate yourself
this isn't how it should be
I'm sorry that you're dead inside
and on the outside, black and blue
but most of all, I'm sorry for
the fact that I am you....
Version IV
I'm sorry you're a whore
I'm sorry you're a freak
I'm sorry you're pathetic
and I'm sorry you're so weak
I'm sorry you're so ugly
and scared to leave your bed
I'm sorry you're so scarred
and fucked up in the head
I'm sorry you'll always be this way
no matter what you do
I'm sorry that I can't escape
the fact that I am you
~ashley carver
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Comments: 30
well...sorry is the word for the day...well written once again. love the dispay images for you poems by the way
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i like these ones alot more than the other two
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i love these versions the most i think. but the other 2 r also so good. maybe u can try to fit it all into one poem. each version as is, but one after another to make one. i dunno. i like these theyre real good!
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*Goosebumps* Sorry I didn`t read this till now..chilling stuff....You need to write a book and share your insight with more people...I`me sure you would find many Illustrators to lend a hand.
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I would, but I'm broke, I have no one to illustrate....and I honestly don't think too many people, if any, would buy it
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Then find yourself a rocking band and write lyrics...your stuff kicks the shit out of most 'dark' bands. 
Btw....been up all night, huffing and puffing...if I sound like a maniac please excuse me..
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here...ill sum it up for you...Youve got talent! thanks for commenting because i probably wouldnt of been able to find your stuff if you didnt...this is definintly a fav
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aww, thanks hun
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It's nice that there are people who can except their mistakes and take responability (better late then ever)
Nice!!
PS: nice photo
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thank you very much
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your photo with a little thingy on your head!!! LOL
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Im sorry i like this poem.
Im sorry i stole your pillow.
Im sorry im sorry im sorry!
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oh holy powerful the first one. wow.
the second one too.
wow.
i always feel like that.
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haha. hug attack.
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it seems to say everyone one of them speak beautifully of another thought or protrayal. Magnificently catapred in all peices.
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