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Published: 2012-03-27 22:37:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 61612; Favourites: 1147; Downloads: 1979
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Pencils & Inks:
Flats:
Colors: Me
This is actually version 4 of 4.
EDIT:
Things I fixed:
-Made wall TEAL instead of GREEN
-Desaturated the pillows
-Adjusted the light render
-I feel ashamed and embarressed that I did not notice before, but gave her teeth
Credit:
Bed Pattern: [link] by ~Etoile-du-nord
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Comments: 19
Let's crank that rating up to 11!
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It's interesting comparing a black and white piece to a colored version. Both have their pros and cons, but there are some awesome details here I like more than the B&W one, like Venom's glowing eye.
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How come you're not participating????????????????
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I am, but for some reason, they didn't post it. I sent a word off to Voltage. IDK what happened this time. D: sad face.
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I know you value comments -negative as well as positive I hope. I usually refrain from writing criticisms since they're unpleasant, but sometimes I think they are useful too. I think this is the weakest of the pieces you coloured. Personally, I never care much for having a lot of colours in one piece, because I like more balanced palettes. The green of the walls, the saturated red of the pillows, the hot pink in the sheets and lips don't quite match. But what I think looks off is that poor Gwen doesn't have teeth!
I like how you achieved a credible environment, the skin tone and the hair. And the way you coloured the sheets is so lovely and well done!
I really hope my comments are useful!
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Thank you!
Your words are indeed helpful. While I do love "good job" and "great work", it is pointing out the things that I missed, or can improve on that I love the most. It is always appreciated when another artist critiques my work. Not hate-bashing of course, because no one appreciates that. But the way you did it was perfect. It is because of critiques like this that I am able to improve things.
Thank you again. I think that you will appreciate the changes.
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There you go! Now it looks a lot better! I'm very happy you found my comments useful.
I've learnt a lot of people can't stand criticism, so I only used to write "good job" and great work" until I actually improved thanks to the criticisms and feedback. So I know it helps.
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I like your comment value stamp, and your skills own! this image is outstanding
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