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Been working on this for months now. This is more or less the intended title page for a story I want to eventually do, the basic idea of which revolves around Raf being converted into a cyborg/mini-con and his mind corrupted to serve the Decepticons by Soundwave, and the Autobots' attempt to get him back after recapturing him. (Its part of a bigger story arc so there is more to it). Credit for the design for Raf's Decepticon form goes to the very talented who did a four part commission for me back in March. I hand drew the lines for this then used Correl Painter to do the coloring, experimenting with the concept of layers and opacity as I did so to simulate glass. Originally there was going to be a small scene in the background of Decepti-Raf attacking Jack and Miko, but I thought the look of shock on the faces of the two Autobots he's closest to would do better, and of course Soundwave playing a heavy role in this earned him a spot... Not sure why Megatron is here, but I do think he'd appreciate the rather delightful irony that the human Optimus got so angry over Megatron nearly killing is now going to be helping the Decepticons in their bid to take over Earth. Motivation for this was primarily so my favorite Prime human gets to be immortalized in my gallery. I am thinking of doing a crossover pic featuring Raf facing off against Sari Sumdac in her Cybertronian form, though.Now, since you probably all know me best as a writer, I thought I'd include a small little vignette to accompany this picture. Its nothing to special, just a little something i wanted to do, but it might get the story's mood across.
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"And how is our 'patient' faring?" Megatron asked as he entered the chambers of his dependable Third in Command, Soundwave. The Decepticon Communications Officer stood at a berth, a small soldering iron in his hand. On the berth, the body of a small, familiar human lay completely still, a small plume of smoke rising from the dark blue metal covering his chest. Soundwave's faceplate displayed a picture of the subject, vital signs all showing within acceptable parameters. From the spymaster's head three cords descended to the human's own cranium, interfacing flawlessly with the newly installed cybernetics that had been added to his brain.
Megatron smiled. The Autobots' human hacker friend had been a useful addition to Optimus's team, allowing them to make use of the humans' primitive technology to outmaneuver the Decepticons. Too useful.
But now...
Soundwave removed the cables from the subject's head, as well as his own, signalling he was done. Megatron moved in closer, examining the former human. Flesh and muscle had been stripped away, replaced with metal and machinery based on Cybertronian design. Of course bone had also had to be replaced to support the heavier weight, as had several organs, amongst which had been the inclusion of a t-cog from one of Soundwave's smaller drones.
"Wake him," Megatron commanded. Soundwave's hand hovered over the subject. The hum of flowing energon came to the Decepticons' audials. Brown eyes now tinged with red opened up as a translucent visor appeared over the upper half of the boy's face, generated from his new helm. The brown filaments that existed in place of his hair glowed slightly, dispelling the heat building in the human's new body as he came back to consciousness.
As Rafael awoke, data danced across his new visor, system checks and diagnostics detailing the condition of his body. Immediately the two Decepticons were high-lighted in his view, accompanied by identifying information. Somewhere at the back of the boy's mind a sense of apprehension appeared. Something was... off about this situation. Mechanical muscles tensed, but a sudden wave of calm broke through, easing the cyber-boy's mind. Soundwave's hand had not wavered in the least as he accessed Rafael's new mental link to him.
The newborn mini-con rose from where he lay, standing on top of the berth. He was still laughably small, but Soundwave had not "recruited" this human for combat capabilities. Still, Megatron couldn't help but be delighted as he beheld this new addition to his forces. How angry had Prime been, how furious when, just a few scant months ago, Megatron had nearly snuffed this very human's life out? And now he was a Decepticon. A part of the ancient gladiator wondered what Optimus would think once he found out about this. The gray robot stood before the berth, arms crossing his massive chest as he gazed down at the transformed human, red optics fixing on the Decepticon shield etched into the armor that made up the former organic's chest. The symbol he would wear until the day he was either no longer of use or... off-lined by the Autobots. Sharp denta displayed on the warlord's face as he pictured that thought.
"I, Megatron, Leader of the Decepticons, bid you welcome," Megatron declared in his most grandiose voice. Rafael backed up a bit, but did not run. Soundwave would not permit that. "Know that you will be a valued addition to my army, provided you are a loyal and obedient soldier." The warlord gestured to his TIC. "You will fall under the purview of Soundwave, assisting him in infiltration and retrieval. Any lingering loyalty you might feel to your former species is... understandable, but irrelevant. You are a Decepticon now, a cybertronian, and that is where your new loyalties must remain." Megatron's eyes narrowed. "Now, bow before your Master, my loyal soldier, and accept your rightful place in my new world."
For a brief moment Rafael stood still, his mind in turmoil as it processed all this new information. Something didn't feel right about this, but for the life of him he could not understand why. Soundwave had gifted him, raised him from pathetic being he was before. Megatron had now granted him purpose beyond himself. They were his friends, his allies.
And yet, even as he thought this, images of a yellow Cybertronian danced across his mind, a name coming unbidden to his lips.
"Bum-Bumblebee..." Raf spoke, his hand touching his forehead as a distressed sound escaped him. Megatron frowned as he saw this, eyes turning to Soundwave. The faceless Con nodded, turning back to his new deployer. The spymaster reached out across the void between minds, seeking out the altered human through their shared link. Soon he found the source of the boy's distress. Soundwave had spent days sifting through the boy's memories once he'd been able to access them, burying those that would be problematic while subtly altering those that would prove useful, warping Rafael's mind just enough without losing those parts that would make him a most useful ally to have. But organic brains were still alien territory, no matter how much modification they'd undergone. With skilled precision and subtle skill, the deployer commander forced the old memory of the boy's former partner down, locking it away where it could cause no problem. As Soundwave completed his task, the look of discomfort on Rafael's face disappeared, replaced with a calm clarity, then an accepting smile.
"Forgive my hesitation, Lord Megatron," Rafael said in a tone that seemed quite happy as he knelt upon the berth, bowing in Megatron's direction. "I apparently had a programming bug Master Soundwave corrected for me." Rafael's eye rose to meet his leader's gaze. "How may I serve you, my liege?"
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Comments: 35
AsherTye In reply to MudkipPrime [2017-11-07 04:30:12 +0000 UTC]
The intention was that he would get better over the course of the series, so it isn't so bad. Never strictly human again, but the Bots would have eventually gotten him free of Soundwave's control.
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MudkipPrime In reply to AsherTye [2017-11-09 01:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! (Though I'm that weird person who thinks that they could become friends or something. XD Mainly Soundwave and Raf XD )
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AsherTye In reply to MudkipPrime [2017-11-09 02:09:33 +0000 UTC]
I'm of a similar mind most of the time. I think Soundwave and Raf would have enough similarity to find common ground. But this was one of my storylines for an alternate season 3 of the show. Of course the other one linked Raf to the Quintessons.
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GreatShales [2016-06-15 00:04:11 +0000 UTC]
Quick question,
How does the T-cog fit into all this?
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AsherTye In reply to GreatShales [2016-06-15 12:30:00 +0000 UTC]
How so? If you mean it's purpose, it allows the mechanical parts of Raf's body to transform, though it's primitive nature limits his alt-mode to simple forms.
If you mean physically, it's internalized. It's modified from one of Soundwave's mini drones (hence it's size and primitive nature). It's also part of the problem he has with energy consumption, hence why he can't go more than. 24 hours without a recharge.
Did that answer your question?
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AsherTye In reply to GreatShales [2016-06-15 17:08:37 +0000 UTC]
No problem. And thanks for taking an interest in my idea. Hopefully I'll be able to do something with it soon.
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Omnicenos [2013-06-15 15:41:50 +0000 UTC]
Interesting concept. I'm unfamiliar with the world beyond the basics, but I think it looks well thought out.
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AsherTye In reply to Omnicenos [2013-06-15 16:17:47 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Still hammering out the details to allow it to be an upgrade over a Possession-Sue, but I'm coming close. Sadly I probably won't get to this story until after the show ends ;_;
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Annpar2009 [2013-06-15 00:07:46 +0000 UTC]
not bad
you should make a story of this
it is really interesting + i think Raf is a cybertronian like sari on TF Animated
why Raf is a cybertronian? .. well because he is well talent hacker and he understands bubebbe like no humans does only cybertronians can understand bubebbe
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-15 16:11:29 +0000 UTC]
I do want to make the story, there's just a bit of ground to cover before we get to that point. A part of me likes the idea of Raf being a Cybertronian, but something tells me I'd have the same problem I had with Sari being a Cybertronian. But its a cool idea. Or he could be a Predacon. Hopefully I can come up with some good toys for "Decepti-Raf" to have.
I do know I'd like to make another picture featuring Raf meeting Sari in their cyber-forms.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-15 16:54:57 +0000 UTC]
yes this is a cool idea but you could make this story to sound more logical
i will send you a note of the story i am going to make at the start and see if you like it
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-15 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Well the story was just a very rough draft. I'll probably use something a bit finer when I get into Metal conversion properly. I'll read the nlte and get back to you ASAP.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-15 22:19:20 +0000 UTC]
so what we will be like what RP to make the story or just one of us makes part 1 and the other part 2??
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-15 23:28:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry to say I'm not much of an RP partner these days, if only because of how busy I am with my own stories.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-16 09:15:21 +0000 UTC]
i see
can i see your stories link?
i want to take a look at it
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-16 14:51:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, here is the first chapter of Kindred Sparks [link] though chapters six through eight are currently undergoing a revision. That starts the story idea, though I haven't actually gotten to MetalΒ Conversion yet. It requires a bit of build up.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-16 19:48:32 +0000 UTC]
i see
but still is sounds amazing to me and i would love to read more
when i first saw raf understand bubbe in the EP's i thought he was a 50% cybertronian as 50% human like sari, and at this then on your story you don't need to surgery away raf humanity
you can easily just give him some sort of danger to shoe his true self and later soundwave could only re-program him
and why the medic A-bot didn't know about this? you could easily think like raf's human 50% hide that from everybody
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-16 20:48:28 +0000 UTC]
I won't lie, I had actually hoped that too when I saw him communicate with BB so easily, despite some yowls from the fandom about just repeating Sari's story. I was particularly hopeful when he got blasted by Dark Energon thanks to Megatron that that would reveal something (you know in the commentary for the episode the writers say the original plan was that Raf would start sprouting techno-organic bits from his body and start hearing the voice of Unicron? Apparently they decided it would distract too much from Optimus and Megatron's conflict).
But I'm comfortable with this, especially since I think it'll allow Raf to grow as a character. Not only do we get to explore his darker side, we get to see how he handles the memory of what he did as a Decepticon once the Autobots rescue him, amongst the many other hardships having to go through something like this. Plus i think it affords and interesting opportunity to see a Decepticon place value on a human of all things and see how he'd handle it. Sari's story let her find her place in the world, Raf's is determining if he can still have his.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-16 21:10:49 +0000 UTC]
that is also cool
but if his body got so damaged why not transport raf's mind to a protoform so he becomes a cybertronian?
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-16 21:38:41 +0000 UTC]
That is a route to take, but I honestly am not sure that tech would be available in the Prime Universe (G1 had something similar for Autobot Spike, but it proved to be quite unstable). Plus, is it then really Raf in there or just a copy of his mental data? But Cy.L.A.S. proves humans can function with Cybertronian tech, and even use energon. I can quite see Soundwave using any notes Knockout made regarding Cy.L.A.S. and streamlining the process. I am wondering if Raf's cyber-self though does count as a protoform, given that its based off his original human appearance.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-16 22:13:31 +0000 UTC]
well TF Prime do have protoforms how else would starscream clone himself
but you story said on the cover "You are a Decepticon now, a cybertronian, and that is where your new loyalties must remain" so i am just trying to understand
when mega said that is then raf a 100% cybertronian or just a human with machine parts?
because if he is a human with machine parts then he is not really a cybertronian from cybertron, see what i mean?
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-17 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]
Oh I know they have protoforms, but the problem would be the interface between Raf's organic mind and a computerized one. Soundwave already had to add implants to let him mess with Raf's mind, but if he's already done thatn why not just go ahead and revamp his whole body.
I think I decided something like 85% of Raf's body is now mechanical, maybe 90%. So you are right when you say Raf wouldn't really be a full Cybertronian. But what Megatron said was more for Soundwave's benefit than Raf's. Soundwave only tweaked Raf's (I'm code-naming him Interface) mind, he didn't take it over. Megatron's words are meant to serve more as a "whatever you thought you were before, you're one of us now, so deal with it." When I do the story for real, I'll probably do something a little more ceremonial like the ritual of the Decepti-brand like the Constructicons got in Animated... or maybe borrow from IDW.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-17 19:59:14 +0000 UTC]
yea guess so
but still many other people are often using some kind of weapons to turn humans to robots and robots to humans
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-17 21:51:20 +0000 UTC]
I've never liked the ease with which people do that. Like how apparently bathing the kids in energon would turn them into sparks and such. But part of the fun for this is its a commitment of resresources for the Cons, and not something that can be easily reversed for Raf's benefit.
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Annpar2009 In reply to AsherTye [2013-06-17 21:58:22 +0000 UTC]
yea
i have never read a story like this one you are going to make
to me it sound very interesting and i can't wait to read the new one
you know i pretty much like soundwave in prime
so i might draw something in your story, but more to the new one
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AsherTye In reply to Annpar2009 [2013-06-18 03:58:50 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, that'd be sweet. I look forward to seeing it.
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AsherTye In reply to RaNzZz4 [2013-06-14 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]
He he he. Just have to figure out what kinda toys Soundwave would give him during his "upgrade."
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AsherTye In reply to rysenok [2013-06-09 17:06:31 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked it. And thanks for the fav.
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AsherTye In reply to Mad-hatter-scaecrow [2013-06-08 00:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Ah thank you, ah thank you.
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