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AshesPix β€” Falling into the abyss

Published: 2014-02-06 06:46:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 683; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Cedric could feel himself floating. He tried opening his eyes, and found that it was pitch black. He held his hand in front of him but he saw nothing. He grew alarmed. He tried flailing what he felt were his arms, groping aimlessly in the dark, yet his hands found nothing. Was he dead? He felt for his own chest, and sighed with relief when he felt his rapidly beating heart. Then, there was another thing that alarmed him. He could hear nothing, not his sigh, nor the loud pounding of his heart.

He floated aimlessly for what seemed an eternity, pondering where he was, and why he was here. Did they manage to get him at last? After all the pain he have caused them, he won't be surprised if they have successfully murdered him in his sleep. He chuckled mirthlessly, the pitiful sound he couldn't even hear.

Regret. That was the only emotion that could describe the painful and suffocating feeling that was drowning his being.

Then, he heard the sound of a drop hitting a pool of water. Was he crying? Yet he couldn't feel it. Has he become that cold that he couldn't even feel his own tears? He felt his cheeks, and found that they were dry. Another drop fell, and his cheek became wet. He traced his fingers on it, and placed it on his lips. It tasted like blood.

It was blood. His blood.

Excruciating pain suddenly flared from his right arm. The drops were falling faster, into the pool of liquid that he could now tell was his own blood.

Then suddenly, he could feel his back becoming wet, and he found himself lying on the pool of liquid. The dripping sound multiplied, and the level of the thick liquid rose. It continued to rise, until it almost covered his face. He flailed his arms and legs, struggling to keep himself on surface. His hand tried to reach out for some sort of salvation.

Laughter. He could hear laughter coming from the bottom of the pool. They were mocking him.

He cried for help, and as if in answer, he could see a the surface of the black pool. He tried to reach for it. But just as he was nearing the surface, his chest started to burn. Then a burst of purple smoke arise from his lungs. Stinging his throat making his eyes tear up. He was falling deeper into the abyss

...

He wakes up from his dream, sweating, panting. He was short on oxygen. His head hurts.

It all seemed so real like a old memory he cant get a grip on. But...

"It's just a bad dream"

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Story belong to my online friend who only wants to be known as Faith.

Art & Cedric(c) belong to me

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Comments: 53

AshesPix In reply to ??? [2014-04-03 12:40:36 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha calm down now. *Shoosh pap your face*

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 12:44:35 +0000 UTC]

XDDD can't help it manΒ 

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AshesPix In reply to 12luigi [2014-04-03 12:46:49 +0000 UTC]

So many feels! XD

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 12:48:45 +0000 UTC]

you made it that way XDDD Β is their away to regain his heart ??? ? ? ?

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AshesPix In reply to 12luigi [2014-04-03 12:51:51 +0000 UTC]

... Not sure how. But maybe there is.

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 12:57:17 +0000 UTC]

HHHHHH so there's still hope

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AshesPix In reply to 12luigi [2014-04-03 12:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Heheh xD

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 12:59:28 +0000 UTC]

:I don't loose faith

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AshesPix In reply to 12luigi [2014-04-03 13:04:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 13:05:59 +0000 UTC]

oh also best of luck between money and bodo , bro

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AshesPix In reply to 12luigi [2014-04-03 13:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you bro! ;w;

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12luigi In reply to AshesPix [2014-04-03 13:10:57 +0000 UTC]

no prob :3

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Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-23 19:36:44 +0000 UTC]

omg. I just relished something after all this time...the smoke kind of looks like a heart!Β 

I just saw it * v * ))Β 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-23 21:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha that took you long enough xD

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-23 21:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Yush it did!

but I was like looking through some pictures I faved and then I looked at them and then when I came to this on i was like.

wooooooah!!!!! and pointed at the screen xDDΒ 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-23 21:14:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol xD i can imagine the look xD

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-23 21:54:37 +0000 UTC]

hahaha yush xDDΒ 

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Ask-TheFantasyFilled [2014-02-07 13:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww, poor CedricΒ 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-TheFantasyFilled [2014-02-07 14:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha yeah poor him just misunderstood

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Ask-TheFantasyFilled In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-08 02:49:31 +0000 UTC]

*snuggles cedric* I shall have Kili love Β the living chiz out of him

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-TheFantasyFilled [2014-02-08 04:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha that will be painful.

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Ask-TheFantasyFilled In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-08 04:48:47 +0000 UTC]

He can deal with the pain!! >:U

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-TheFantasyFilled [2014-02-08 05:16:43 +0000 UTC]

He is a really strong person :-V

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Ask-TheFantasyFilled In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-08 13:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Stubborn reallyΒ 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-TheFantasyFilled [2014-02-08 13:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah xD

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Ask-TheFantasyFilled In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-08 13:46:20 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe

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Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 07:10:34 +0000 UTC]

omg....Β  Β 

That.was.epic!

like wowie!

omg!!Β 

Urmahgawd! like I don't even have words! ))

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 10:22:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuuuu bud~ and calm down~~~

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 10:23:32 +0000 UTC]

hahah yeah xD sorry~

Well no problem ^^

It was a powerful story!Β 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 10:28:32 +0000 UTC]

Well I asked help from a friend to make the story. Ill tell her that ^w^ I should put Credit.

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 10:51:43 +0000 UTC]

yeah ^^it was super cool!

xD

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 11:02:17 +0000 UTC]

I know rights! She is amazing! And she also help me with my short webcomic. that I will do in the end of the year *w*

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 11:02:50 +0000 UTC]

omg! that's awesome!!!!Β 


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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 11:30:18 +0000 UTC]

It is~~~~!!!! And all of the character are based from real life people

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 14:01:40 +0000 UTC]

omg!! so coool!!Β 

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-PrinceBodo [2014-02-06 14:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so~ ^w^

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Ask-PrinceBodo In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 14:15:57 +0000 UTC]

yesh ^^Β 

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Ask-Odd [2014-02-06 06:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Holy friggin' shit this is so amazing. Like woah, Seriously
Mad rad~))

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-Odd [2014-02-06 10:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha thank you~ >_<

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Ask-Odd In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 10:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh golly, you're very welcome hun ;;w;;

I am wondering, is it might an rp starter of some kind? uvu ))

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-Odd [2014-02-06 10:30:10 +0000 UTC]

If you want it to be hehehe~

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Ask-Odd In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 10:36:50 +0000 UTC]

Hhh, I don't know what would be a good starter though since it was a dream.... Hnnnnnngh

Imma think something out now, ah))

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-Odd [2014-02-06 10:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Don't stress yourself. If you can't think of anything its okay~

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Ask-Odd In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 10:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh golly, alright, alright~ ;v; ))

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AshesPix In reply to Ask-Odd [2014-02-06 11:01:31 +0000 UTC]

take your time ~ ^w^

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midoriheyashi [2014-02-06 06:49:41 +0000 UTC]

.........

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AshesPix In reply to midoriheyashi [2014-02-06 10:20:54 +0000 UTC]

No words to describe this huh?

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midoriheyashi In reply to AshesPix [2014-02-06 18:36:15 +0000 UTC]

i-i just wanna hug him !!!!!!!!(grabs, hugs)

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AshesPix In reply to midoriheyashi [2014-02-06 22:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha xD

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Ask-GargoylePrince [2014-02-06 06:49:29 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome!

btw you're not going to softball practice today?

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