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Published: 2004-03-19 03:41:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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Description I was given the topic by a friend hence I made of it what I did.

The picture was taken by myself on or around May 28, 2003, 4:17:06 PM at Edgewater Park on the shores of Lake Erie.
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Comments: 7

kaije [2004-03-20 09:49:25 +0000 UTC]

intresting topic. when i reread this, i thought of the rats as feelings; but then to me, nearly everything is feeling. they are the unseen that remain even after everyone has died and everything has fallen.

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jaggy [2004-03-19 16:44:54 +0000 UTC]

An interesting take on things, and an interesting perpective The rat view of war. I wonder what they think of us really, we the only species that goes to war against each other...

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PreciousLoLo [2004-03-19 04:09:43 +0000 UTC]

i thought it was going to be about those sewer rats in lake erie when i saw the first stanza. lol. it's rather good. keep it up!!

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aspirine In reply to PreciousLoLo [2004-03-19 04:12:38 +0000 UTC]

I could do a poem on them, lol. I'd have the pictures of them for my cover -shruggs-

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PreciousLoLo In reply to aspirine [2004-03-19 04:16:36 +0000 UTC]

lol. i'd be interested in reading that.

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aspirine In reply to PreciousLoLo [2004-03-19 04:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Then I shall write - give me a day to work on it.

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PreciousLoLo In reply to aspirine [2004-03-19 04:39:37 +0000 UTC]

take your time. xD

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