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AstralWind β€” She waits

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Description Ona ceka

"Sacinjen od osmijeha, stisnutim se ustima stitim od kise.
U meni cvate nebo i bezbroj malih sreca cini me sobom.
Jedna zena je rodena i zivi negdje u ovom gradu.
Zelim ju naci. Znam, proci cu kroz poneki oblak tuge,
bez lutanja i zurno, jer ona ceka mene negdje u ovom gradu.
Jedna je rijeka zastala da saceka more.
Od mojih malih sreca sagradit cu najljepsi osmijeh na njenom licu
i skrenut cu njen pogled na istok gdje plamti nebo."

Ivica Smolec


Sorry for croatian... I don't even dare to translate this in english, but trust me, it's beautiful...


Ok, I tried, but I am NOT a translator. Please keep that in mind, thanks

"Conceived from a smile, with my lips sealed i protect myself from the rain.
Inside of me the sky blossoms and thousands of little happinesses make me myself.
One woman is born and lives somewhere in this town.
I want to find her. I know, I'll pass through some cloud of sorrow,
without wondering and hastily, because she waits for me somewhere in this town.
One river has stopped to wait for the sea.
From my little happinesses I'll build the most beautiful smile on her face
and turn her gaze towards east where the sky burns"

Ivica Smolec
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Comments: 89

ilijaa [2010-08-26 09:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Predivno, doista, a i pjesma je pun pogodak uz ovu fotku!

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JCapela [2009-10-20 10:19:34 +0000 UTC]

nice shot

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vhartley [2008-12-18 02:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful shot and beautiful poem. The shadows and lack of really bright colors in this scene really create a sort of bored, slightly sorrowful feeling. The expression on the model's face and her position really add to this feeling.

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lll22T [2008-10-21 20:28:10 +0000 UTC]

I dont know, why I like that. In fact, I am looking for Rijeka buildings. But seeing this for the second time... Maybe is that the silhuette is so clean and that the second leg is hidden. Or is it the opening tool of the window, which looks like cross from the dinstance. Or is it: the woman is so sad and beautiful. Or is it the triangle in the dark scope.

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milads2001 [2008-03-29 21:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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thegreenmanalishi [2007-12-19 13:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Amazing shot!

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oblak24 [2007-08-30 20:39:20 +0000 UTC]

she looks very sad to me
i wish she will find her mate soul
and i wish that for poet to
tko čeka - dočeka

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Utopia-Nocturna [2007-08-19 23:04:30 +0000 UTC]

The photo is my heart now...I love it!

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brechnuss [2007-05-26 04:12:13 +0000 UTC]

i trust

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lovelylouise [2007-04-29 01:18:19 +0000 UTC]

bardzo ladne zdieczia mas!

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AstralWind In reply to lovelylouise [2007-04-29 11:22:32 +0000 UTC]

?

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Rock--Angel [2007-04-18 11:16:28 +0000 UTC]

lovely shot!!

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ivansivak [2006-12-30 11:43:10 +0000 UTC]

Jedna rijec - odlicno!

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Redattore [2006-09-29 23:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. The contrast in this shot is amazing.

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YoursSincerely [2006-05-29 12:29:57 +0000 UTC]

This is just adorable.

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flegma [2006-05-29 09:34:22 +0000 UTC]

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WiredRogue [2006-03-27 03:42:01 +0000 UTC]

I maybe off my rocker--usually am, but I feel sadness in this. The extreme contrasts just shout it too me. That look from a beautifull women tears at my heart.

Very nice emotive qualities.

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doorstopPhotos [2006-03-21 10:11:57 +0000 UTC]

It's beautifully captured, the exposure is perfect

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poetryprince [2006-02-20 02:33:56 +0000 UTC]

this reminds me of bonnie waiting for clyde. she doesn't know he is coming, but she wants someone to come. someone exciting to make her feel wanted and alive and feel more then just existing because she knows deep inside her she is supposed to do something wild and crazy and important and urgent. that was a great movie.

" my name's Bonnie Parker and this here is Clyde Barrow. we rob banks!!!"

its a great picture with true feeling put into it and i love it.

oh, and the movie is pretty great also

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AstralWind In reply to poetryprince [2006-02-23 19:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks It's nice to see how everyone sees something differen in the photo.

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gurdonark [2006-01-10 11:26:02 +0000 UTC]

Lovely picture, and good use of a poem to go with it.

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dry-tear [2006-01-08 10:17:40 +0000 UTC]

..beauty..

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arnaudlegrand [2006-01-03 12:23:18 +0000 UTC]

I like this one more than the other one. Sharper. Better light. Less grain.

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karleister [2005-12-31 16:43:29 +0000 UTC]

waooo its is trully nice......love the poem!

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antagonistic [2005-12-22 03:03:06 +0000 UTC]

beautiful lighting and excellent composition. ... amazing model as well. wow.

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savianty [2005-12-22 00:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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lastrainson [2005-12-04 15:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Just wow. Beutifully captured moment for a beautiful emotion

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numinous27 [2005-11-28 10:50:16 +0000 UTC]

wonderful captured moment!!

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barbarasobczynska [2005-11-25 11:32:47 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful

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LunaLupin [2005-11-12 14:49:00 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful photo

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SnowDreams [2005-11-11 14:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work, sweetheart.

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pocketUniverse [2005-11-09 12:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Made of smiles, with squeezed lips
I protect myself from rain.
Blossom sky inside of me
With countless little happiness,
Makes me what I am.
One woman was born and lives somewhere in this city.
I wanna find her.
I know, I'll pass through some clouds of sadness,
Withouth lost and quickly,
'cause she's waiting somewhere
In this city, waiting for me.

One river stopped
Waiting for the sea.
From little happiness of mine
I'll create the most beautiful smile on her face
And I'll show her east
For her eyes to see the burning skies.

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AstralWind In reply to pocketUniverse [2005-11-09 18:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you must really love this poem Thanks for the effort (I wish I had more time to do this ) Thanks.

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pocketUniverse In reply to AstralWind [2005-11-09 19:06:47 +0000 UTC]

poem is nice, the photo is beautiful

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JohnKeats [2005-11-08 23:37:37 +0000 UTC]

great shot.


i like it. mainly because it has the ability to tell a story.

the poem is one story, but, just looking at the shot
you start to remeber, all those time

when waiting was needed.

JK.

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seyLA [2005-11-08 15:16:36 +0000 UTC]

awesome lightning!

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WhitePathos [2005-11-08 14:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Great work...The photo, the words.....

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ohyouhandsomeDevil [2005-11-08 13:42:08 +0000 UTC]

great Ε‘otiΔ‡! Ε‘teta Ε‘to nije zavrΕ‘ila boljim plasmanom u naΕ‘oj "močvari"....

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AstralWind In reply to ohyouhandsomeDevil [2005-11-08 16:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Uopce vise necu slat nista tamo! Kad vidim pobjednicke fotke samo mi dode zlo Hvala na komentaru mislim da je zasluzila 10. mjesto (ne mislim da je moglo puno vise od toga) ali isto tako mislim da nisu sve fotke u top 10 zasluzile biti u top 10. Ljudi vise ne znaju sto je fotografija Sto ce im uopce i fotic kad sve tako i onako mogu napraviti u PS-u. Narcis je super i svaka casto ako si ga fakat napravio kako si rekao a ne "zakeljio" u PS

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jarofjuice [2005-11-08 11:18:48 +0000 UTC]

It heavily reminds me of "Corpse Bride". Amazing smoothness and fluidity And good translation

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baratrion [2005-11-07 23:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I don't even know Croatian, but I bet it is a wonderful translation

lovely poetry, lovely lateral light, thanks for sharing. keep up!

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Michel-Lag-Chavarria [2005-11-07 20:26:16 +0000 UTC]

Once again, a pure beauty... And nice words to go with...

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silver-eyes-blue [2005-11-07 20:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Divno je. Doista se znaő poigrati svjetlom. Zavidim ti. Ja osobno sam bolja s riječima....

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peristera [2005-11-07 16:40:40 +0000 UTC]

congratulations!!!!
i love the concept of the photo... cause i'm in this concept nowadays..
it's added to my favorites..

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omdot [2005-11-07 16:24:34 +0000 UTC]

beautiful it is, indeed. and optimistic to the max...
na prvi pogled slika izgleda puna melankolije.
ali kad se procita, opet se pogleda slika. a onda se vidi optimizam, strplenje i mir koji lezi u svemu tome.
ne mogu izraziti koliko ovo volim...!
+fav


om.

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LostFaust [2005-11-07 16:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful sillouete work! Quite well balanced and with excelent contrast and light!
The transaltion seems ok and illustrate the picture quite well! Very well done

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13s69 [2005-11-07 15:20:14 +0000 UTC]

i don't know what i like more.. the amazing shot, the look in your eyes or the translated words?

nicely posed.

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MichaelLaird [2005-11-07 14:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Excellent composition and exposure! Very emotional shot. Well done!!

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j3mz [2005-11-07 14:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh tis is trully wonderful..
The body language and the expression are the perfect embodiment of the melancholy and longing of waiting..
Nice play with light and shadows too..

would be great to see how ur gallery grows.. mind if i add u on deviantwatch??

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carcassius [2005-11-07 13:30:59 +0000 UTC]

the contrast is perfect here...the first thought that came to me when I looked at this was '' its like she is waiting for something that will never come''...I dont know why!!

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