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OMG she's so mean! >: (Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Finale [link]
Well. I didn't know how or where else to add tones. I just hope that it looks "whole" enough
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Comments: 28
PumpedAaron [2008-08-28 20:06:32 +0000 UTC]
Soooool!! Wow, this is so heartrending, you're close combat fight poses are drawn accurately, and you've made me feel JUST how Atticus feels, despaired, hopless, scared.
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manic-pixie [2008-06-20 01:44:17 +0000 UTC]
wow.....you have an amazing storytelling talent. the tension built up has held magnificently.
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NerinokuKai [2008-06-17 15:57:57 +0000 UTC]
Right
I've held back on commenting until now
but-
HOLY CRAP THIS IS GOOD!
Your knack for storytelling and capturing others' personalities is astounding! You give a balanced flow of story and action, while making it emotional at the same time!
I've got but one question
WHERE THE HELL'S THE NEXT PAGE!?
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AstroCrush In reply to NerinokuKai [2008-06-17 16:09:09 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I've added the link already.
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Marstorm [2008-06-17 06:40:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh shi - hurry up and post the next one, this match is the best yet! You actively used the opponent's backstory, AND you just draw plain awesome fight scenes! Good luck, Sol!
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YunalanaStarphyer [2008-06-17 00:01:47 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I love this series! You haven't failed to capture my heart and attention! I await the next pages anxiously--I want more. I truly hope you are considering publishing it? It has a very intriguing story, and I hope there is a very deep background meaning to everything. Do you mean it to be a series, or only a one-shot comic?? I hope you'll decide to make it a series!!!
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RockDeadman In reply to YunalanaStarphyer [2008-06-17 07:28:33 +0000 UTC]
this is an O.C. (Original Character) Tournament....... the purpose of it is to pit one artist's O.C. against another and see who comes out on top...... there's alot of O.C. tournys that happen around here tho.... this is really just the awsome tip of the awsome iceburg.... but i digress....... Go ASTRO Go!!!!!!!!
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RockDeadman [2008-06-16 20:41:59 +0000 UTC]
*fangirl mode, which is very hard for a dude beleave you me*
OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD!!!!!!!!!! What's gonna happen next I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!111!!oneone!!1eleven
MOAR I SAY...... WE WANT MOAR!!!!!one!!one11!eleven
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AstroCrush In reply to RockDeadman [2008-06-17 16:10:15 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow, that indeed is a rare sighting... RDM in fangirl mode
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Elliwiny [2008-06-16 17:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Holy cow... HOLY COW...
When they collided like that... wow... Epic to the tenth power... D8
And When Dira hit Sol... Augh... Oh wow... Gave me shivers, you write her really, really well. >_<
And those last six panels...! Aaaaah! HOLY. COW!!
I'm hyperventilating for that next part! D8
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AstroCrush In reply to Elliwiny [2008-06-17 16:10:39 +0000 UTC]
Dude, you had me on edge with your entire ninth page! X)
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Elliwiny In reply to AstroCrush [2008-06-17 17:52:25 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I guess we're just suckers for cliffhangers. XD
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Mr-Tea-and-Crumpets [2008-06-16 08:40:07 +0000 UTC]
I am amazed by how well you have paced both the action and the story. It really makes me wanna root for Sol and to have him save the day for the poor kid.
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AstroCrush In reply to Mr-Tea-and-Crumpets [2008-06-16 08:47:51 +0000 UTC]
Reading this for the first time on screen, I was worried that the action might have felt too fast. But, thanks! Your comment makes gives me a plus in confidence that the story and action are juggled well.
Didn't want too make it too long, so I just had to find a way to mix it in
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AstroCrush In reply to Jazon19 [2008-06-16 09:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Don't pass out just yet, man
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Beanjamish In reply to ClosetExtrovert [2008-06-16 08:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh I think he's gonna.
Ultimate "freedom".
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ClosetExtrovert In reply to Beanjamish [2008-06-16 17:29:10 +0000 UTC]
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Elliwiny In reply to ClosetExtrovert [2008-06-17 01:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Zombie!Atticus is just as adorable! 8D
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ClosetExtrovert In reply to Elliwiny [2008-06-17 02:17:38 +0000 UTC]
He darn well BETTER BE! D<
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AstroCrush In reply to ConnerCoon [2008-06-16 09:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I never thought I'd see the day that someone would give me that statement I feel so humbled.
Thank you!
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ConnerCoon In reply to AstroCrush [2008-06-16 10:21:21 +0000 UTC]
You deserve it, man! You art and layout or excellent!
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