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Published: 2015-02-04 20:19:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Holy frick....I had this done for days but couldn't upload it due to a loss in the family...missed the deadline...buut Imma submit anyways 'cause the background took me a hellova long time... =w=Team Permafrost for 's contest~ =w=
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Very nice skying pose! Hehe, the gal in the middle is so confident ;_) and the one at the left is also very very cute!
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X3 Thank chuu!!! I love these characters!
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why u no on skype
ive been waiting FOREVER for a reply!
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XDDD Wut comeback?
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Well... you came back! Therefore, a comeback! And as such, welcome back! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
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Gurl dat background is bossful o3o
If you want I can critique this .3.
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Su nuough maaahhn owo
Sures
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*CRITIQUE MODE ACTIVATED*
First off, let's take a look at the poses: First of all, you did a great job on the poses of Crystal and Yara. You gave Crystal a playful look and Yara a childish look, which makes them look special.
Now for Glaze, you did a serious look, which works for her, but the pose of her ski jumping isn't correct; if she landed, she would roll into a snowball the size of a sports car. Plus, she should be further back on her skis, since that's skis for you.
Colors look great, but the shadows on the characters don't seem to coincide with the mountain shadows. Maybe you could lift the shadows on the mountain and brighten them.
One cool addition you could do is a bit of snow being thrown off of the skis and snowboard, showing normal movement on snow.
That's about all I got. .u.
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owo Aweshum, but I actually did intend for Glaze to be goofy like that, she was bein' all cocky XDDD
But yes, in all honesty I was pressed for time and might add more later -w-
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I'm sure you will xD
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girl! look at you drawing backgrounds like a boss >:U it's so amazing and worth it! :u
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X'3 Dawww thank chuuu!!~ I need to do more of those, but my problem is that the characters don' fit into the background, like it's a different style kinda thing, and it's gonna bother me..like with Crystal..her board don' look like it's fitting into the snow properly..=w=''
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no problem x3 and I see what you mean, what you should do is make the characters lineless (no black lineart) it'll make them blend in well in my opinion.Ā
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Yeah dat would helps XDDD
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yes :u it's a difficult task but i think you can do it >:U
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I wish I could Skye like that XDĀ
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LOL! I can't even actually skii =w=
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Same here -^-
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