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Published: 2002-03-10 03:58:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 1383; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 222
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Description this is a pic I drew at work today.. I think this one is horrible.. I really messed up on the angle of her head and her arms and all that.. oh well.. just scanned it in and changed the hue in photoshop.. comments please..
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Comments: 18

xxscarygothxx [2003-08-05 13:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Gees girl! Your art rocks! Love this one though!

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amebaone [2002-12-02 06:34:11 +0000 UTC]

You r right about the head, and the legs look kind of wack and too long, but the skirt and especially the hair ROCK. The curvy and straight lines that outline her are what drew me to this drawing...very nice effect. You have some good work here.


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zor [2002-04-16 06:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Someone commented that they didn't really like the hair, and I beg to differ...It's what drew me to this piece in the first place...It's like flame...

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antisleeper [2002-04-03 19:16:34 +0000 UTC]

all ur stuff rocks. i love ur style u are going on my devwatch
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twentyswords [2002-03-10 16:39:42 +0000 UTC]

again..the sketchiness......fantastic!
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louisfinazzo [2002-03-10 07:57:01 +0000 UTC]

hah, i love how you say all yur shit sucks, and everyones comments are that they love it. and as for little things, like the head being the wrong angle or whatever... i don't think it matters. all these sketches seem to be more about the energy and the expresiveness (to me) instead of getting things proportionally correct. so anyway... good work, keep it up.

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gaston [2002-03-10 07:55:44 +0000 UTC]

wonderful drawing. the movement of the skirt is awesome and so is that of the hair's. i love the expression on her face and the gesture of her arms - the seem to exhibit withdrawal and reclusion, which dramatically contrasts with a head that tilts forward.

the lines in the background work really well too. they make the drawing even more intriguing.

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orphaned [2002-03-10 06:11:59 +0000 UTC]

I like your style. Are you using a ball-point pen? If so, you might want to do a more gradiant cross-hatching on you works. Your shading is very good, would be better if it was a bit lighter though. Good job! Keep it up.

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skyOrange [2002-03-10 06:10:11 +0000 UTC]

y'know, i really ike the angle of her head and shoulders. it almost seems natural for her facial expression. this is neat. very nice work, asunder.

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chemicalcoma [2002-03-10 06:06:49 +0000 UTC]

I like this one, but the hair seems off to me.. Kinda looks like you didn't finish it.. Other than the hair, she's quite lovely and that dress is as lovely as the last.. Very nice job

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spacelotus [2002-03-10 04:20:28 +0000 UTC]

great work! i just love it!!!!

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ellemenno [2002-03-10 04:10:21 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could draw as horrible as you do. I this!
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lobsterclaws [2002-03-10 04:09:53 +0000 UTC]

You're extraordinarily talented! Don't underestimate yourself. I love the backround lines and the hair.

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pyriel [2002-03-10 04:02:39 +0000 UTC]

To be honest with you....I find not a damned thing wrong with that...mighty fine work if you ask me. I really like the background sketch lines...gives perfect depth with the light outside to center dark intensity.

Great work.

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back [2002-03-10 04:01:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah, keep that awful horrible stuff coming
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jaser [2002-03-10 04:01:40 +0000 UTC]

very nice i like it.

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d3ja [2002-03-10 04:01:38 +0000 UTC]

*shakes head* You just don't know something good when you see it do you? I understand what you mean, I'm never happy with drawings I do, but they never turn out nearly this good..

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shipiboconibo [2002-03-10 04:01:03 +0000 UTC]

I think this is awesome, I love your drawing style.
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