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The issue with piece that I could find is the lack of detail and symmetry.
Outlines, in my opinion, of the whole character look a bit off. Especially the left hand of the character. Not only it lacks proper outlines, but also the tip of the fingers on the left hand are pointy as opposed to curvy nature edges of the right hand.
The other thing, which is regarding symmetry, is that the right and left collars lack have no symmetry at all, in my opinion. Their edges are drawn entirely in a different way, giving the impression, that they're each of different shape.
Another thing, which might be my perceptive, or a kind of an optical illusion(brain playing tricks, I read about it) is that the right arm has all a different color as compared to other parts of the body. The right arm looks not a part of the body, but an externally mounted object. The thumb too doesn't look like a part of the arm, but that has to with the way it's outline are drawn.
But in spite of all these minor issues, the drawing overall looks great.
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Thank you for the feedback.
ok, my ppg drawings are meant to be simple and not have to much detail.
as for the left hand, I tried to fix it before I posted but I couldn't completely fix it I know it looks off.
as for the collars please tell me more cause they look like two different shapes cause perspective and the edges ARE round.
as for the right arm, it's glow effects which is my fault I couldn't make it look right without putting it over the whole arm.
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You're very welcome.
I get it, that your ppg drawings are meant to be simple, and not have a lot of detail. Then, I've no problem with it.
For the collars, my advice would be to work on anyone of the two collars, depends on how you want them to be, for example, either you could make the right one look like the left one or vice versa. To make the right one look like the left one, you've to work on it's edges, try elongating them outwards, adding a little curve. I hope you get my point, what I'm trying to say, it's hard to explain over this chat thing.
And the thumb on the right hand, would still look the same, that is, not a part of the hand, even with no glow effect on the right arm. It's because of it's outlines. I think, the one on it's bottom edge kinda looks making it a separate shape. Without it, the thumb would seemingly have an open outline, merging with the rest of the hand.
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if you look at the sticker ver.Β Bubbles Sticker Β it shows you what the collar looks like without being blocked by the puff sleeves. (it's a blouse so of course the collar is short and round and it's puffy)
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