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Published: 2014-01-07 16:54:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1241; Favourites: 119; Downloads: 0
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This is a nice photograph. Tonal variace is good with just enough detail to move the eye. The only nit would be the nearly 1/2 frame split of the horizon and the left and right split of the tree placement. A bit more left or right may change the focus and feel of the image, letting the tree float or reside within the space, let the other elements play a role in the attention of the solidary tree. I like the vignette. It does focusing the eye right to the tree.
While the idea is one that has been the subject of countless images. this one is a good execution because of the gloomy tonal application and the vignette.
I think a message does come across with this image. To me it is one of solitude with maybe a touch of sadness and weariness.
Is the photograph aspect this wide over short or is that something of dA is doing?
If it is of the photographers doing, it is a nice touch.
Over all a pleasing work. Nice job.
Marty McKimmey
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I have to slightly disagree with Marty, 'cos the centering of the tree has a pourpose here. Centering enhances the solitude, suggests the theme as sacred, religious item, or in certain cases it points to something that wants to hide. Therefore I won't necessarily change the composition.
As you have the RAW, it is very good idea to give his suggestions a go, since nothing will get lost or ruined.
For my taste it has a bit too much darkness, the ground almost looses its otherwise interesting textures. I would give some light back (my monitor is almost freshly calibrated) and even would reduce a bit of vignetting. At this stage it is too obviously artificial, and it has a bit diamond-like shape while the theme would benefit from a more rounded one.
In all other aspects that I got aware of, this image is very good and well done.
I reserve the right of being false or even changing my opinion if I missed something...
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thanks a lot for your critique, i'll try to use our suggestions, i still have RAW file
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Kurde, zacząłem robić grę w stylu STALKER'a, i na razie dokładnie tak to wygląda, pole, niebo i drzewko(może kilka) X"""D
Zarąbista fotka.
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gdzieś w okolicach podzamcza piekoszowskiego
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nie mam pojęcia,co to za miejsce... 
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cóż proszę bardzo 
Piekoszów 50° 53.713', 20° 29.469'
pozdro
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ej twoje dane są zbędne ,naprawde haha znając życie, zapewne nie bede miala okazji ,zeby zobaczyc to miejsce. Piekne miejsce : )
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Bardzo fajne zdjęcie. Szczególnie podoba mi się pewna paralelność nieba i ziemi - udało Cię trafić na piękne chmury.
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Dzięki fakt chmury były przednie spędziłem w tym miejscu 3 godziny czekając na nie, ale się opłaciło.
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Świetne zdjęcie,ale nie wiem czemu,kiedy na nie patrzę jest mi,no nie wiem..smutno?
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dzięki, cóż, samotność jest smutna
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niestety,wiem coś o tym
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I love this. I have a series of songs called Solidary Oak. This is exactly what I had envisioned. Nice work. THe B&W works very well.
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thanks a lot, glad you like it
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