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I'D LIKE HELP ON THIS ONE
OK, So I want to do a revamp of my 'sona because of her new back story (it makes her old one look like I made it up when i was 5...which is probably true...) But am having a VERY hard time with it!
SO WHICH DO YOU GUYS LIKE BEST? and WHY? IS THERE SOMETHING I COULD DO TO MAKE IT BETTER?
Please note: the only differences are whether or not their is silver on her face, and the markings on her back legs, the rest is suppose to be exactly the same (although I did a better sob of the new body markings on the top one, and a better job on the tail on the bottom one). HOWEVER I WILL MIX AND MATCH THE SILVER ON HER FACE / BACK LEG MARKINGS AS NEEDED
ALSO: note: most of the SILVER markings (not the dark grey, those remain) will not usually show up, the exceptions are: her tail, the ones on her ears, and her back legs (which is why I'm posting this).

I DO NOT OWN THE LINEART (I wish I could draw that well) I tried drawing her like 5 times and got tired of it so I used a lineart for the first time D: But this is one good lineart

Lineart (c) and is here: [link]
Kai is (c) and I don't want anyone taking my designs! they're not free

Description
I'D LIKE HELP ON THIS ONE
OK, So I want to do a revamp of my 'sona because of her new back story (it makes her old one look like I made it up when i was 5...which is probably true...) But am having a VERY hard time with it!
SO WHICH DO YOU GUYS LIKE BEST? and WHY? IS THERE SOMETHING I COULD DO TO MAKE IT BETTER?
Please note: the only differences are whether or not their is silver on her face, and the markings on her back legs, the rest is suppose to be exactly the same (although I did a better sob of the new body markings on the top one, and a better job on the tail on the bottom one). HOWEVER I WILL MIX AND MATCH THE SILVER ON HER FACE / BACK LEG MARKINGS AS NEEDED
ALSO: note: most of the SILVER markings (not the dark grey, those remain) will not usually show up, the exceptions are: her tail, the ones on her ears, and her back legs (which is why I'm posting this).

I DO NOT OWN THE LINEART (I wish I could draw that well) I tried drawing her like 5 times and got tired of it so I used a lineart for the first time D: But this is one good lineart

Lineart (c) and is here: [link]
Kai is (c) and I don't want anyone taking my designs! they're not free