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This was one hell of a pose to pull off._______________________________________________________________________________________________________
The turn of a page, the scribbling of a quill upon parchment, the endless tick of clocks; these sounds echoed on within his mind, unable to focus any longer upon the volumes that lay before him. Danny sighed, closing the book in front of him, giving up on trying to decipher any more of the text. He'd lost track of the hours he'd spent sitting there attempting to scramble through the sheer amount of homework he'd procrastinated on... no doubt the time keeper wasn't going to be pleased with him...
The crick of the door opening caused the teen to jolt upright within his chair, banging his knee upon the desk. Muttering a few curses before finding himself pulled out of his thoughts by a familiar chuckle. ...forget speaking.... Even think of the devil and the devil shall come.... A scowl crossed his face as he turned his emerald gaze upwards to catch ruby one of his teacher. The man in question seeming relatively amused.
"Taking a break already?" The time master looked over the ruffled teen, still amused. He'd expected such.
"Well forgive me if I can't focus after a few hours... I'm not my sister after all...." The teen in question let a snarl curl on his lips as he spoke. But then it hit him... the recognition of his words; his gaze becoming downcast as the turned back towards his studies in subdued silence. It had been so long since he had seen Jazz... his parents... his friends...
The air of misery hung for a long while between the two spirits. Enough time for Clockwork to have shifted from child to elder and back again in several intervals as the young phantasm attempted to burry his emotions within the numerous books in front of him. He figured it was time to break the tension and turn the child's attention elsewhere.
"Daniel..."
"What..."
"I have an assignment for you."
Those very words nearly had the boy falling out of his chair. His form whirled round with a rather mutinous expression.
"Seriously? What now? Some essay I have to write with even more books I can barely decipher?!" Danny was all but fuming. Another pause, the air once again holding that constricting feeling between them before the time keeper once again broke it.
"Not in the slightest." A smirk visibly placed itself upon his usually stoic face as he watched the boy. The snowy haired teen shifting between different expressions, from anger to confusion, from confusion to dread.
"Is it some obnoxious equation...."
"No."
"Meditating?"
"Nope."
"Um..... a worm hole?"
"Where ever did you get that idea?" He just raised brow at the boy. Sometimes he could only ponder on where the child pulled such strange ideas out from. Danny just sighed in frustration, he hated it when the older spirit played these games on him.
"What is it then..?"
"Tired of guessing already?"
"That's not funny..."
Clockwork chuckled at this, simply mused, his gaze having shifted towards reading over the titles of the tomes upon the shelf somewhere during the conversation. He let his fingertips run along them as he perused the names with only half interest. He was simply waiting to see how long it would take before Daniel lost his patience again, which wouldn't take long; but it was something the boy would have to learn to overcome. He let the moment hang, only briefly glancing over at the younger spirit to gage how far he could push him before he decided it was time to let up. Just before the teen was about to open his mouth and yell at him to answer he spoke.
"I have a feeling you will enjoy this one."
"As far as I can tell.. I haven't enjoyed any of this..." Danny scowled, his arms spreading out to gesture to the confines of the room and numerous study materials.
"Then a good vent should be affective then." He mused once more, pulling a tome off the shelf and proceeded to open it to a random page. He knew as well as Daniel did that he was playing a game with him, but it was a necessity to have to boy frustrated with him if the lesson was to fulfill its purpose.
"Huh...?" The teen just stared over at the male whom was pretending to ignore him. A look of blank confusion visible upon his face as he attempted to decipher his teacher's words, "What are you getting at...?"
"Hit me."
"WHAAAAAAT?!?!" Danny couldn't help himself, the sheer blank expression that held on Clockwork's face as he said such words left him more than a little flabbergasted. As far as the time keeper was concerned, he just kept the same dead serious poker face.
"As simple as I put it. I want to you try and land a successful hit on me, " he closed the book with a snap, emphasizing his point as his gaze remained fixated upon the teen's wide eyed stare.
"But.. I .. um... whaa...." He couldn't get himself to form a complete sentence, his mind simply wouldn't allow it at that moment. The very thoughts that swam through his head or even the notion that his teacher would be so masochistic to even suggest such a thing left him speechless. However he just barely managed to pull his mind back into reality as the head of the time master's staff swung itself at his face.
Skidding backwards across the stone floor with a hiss, he glowered over at him, his teeth slightly bared, "What the hell was that for?!"
"We don't have all day now... And if you won't come of your own volition I shall invoke it," he pointed the staff at Danny in a threatening manner. The teen's eyes widening in understanding. Clockwork was dead serious, and if he didn't oblige he wasn't going to be allowed to simply walk out of the room.
"Fine! But don't blame me when this is over!" He cried, lunging forth to charge the older spirit. The spirit in question smirking once more, the look of playful mischief in his eyes as he spun away from the teen's claws at the last second. The boy in question finding himself slamming face first into the bookshelf.
"Did I forget to mention you have a month for this assignment?" The time keeper simply chuckled, giving the staff a twirl.
"WWWWHHHAAAAAAAATTTTT?!?!?!?"
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Comments: 98
TiaraShin [2013-01-13 12:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Love the little story, their characters are awesome and spot-on. And I love the picture, their poses and expressions are great, interesting background too.
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Atrieisan In reply to TiaraShin [2013-01-13 22:15:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to see that Danny isn't out of character. I was worried he'd end up appearing to OC ish...
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TiaraShin In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 00:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Nope, I feel you did great with him, and Clockwork, of course.
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ApolloNight [2013-01-13 06:42:35 +0000 UTC]
lovely art, love the story just... please update your comic soon. ;_;
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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2013-01-13 06:44:48 +0000 UTC]
I'm working on it, no worries. Tablet is just giving me some issues...
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ApolloNight In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 07:06:25 +0000 UTC]
bet it to show it whos boss! XD
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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2013-01-13 07:08:01 +0000 UTC]
eh.... if only the wire connecting it to the computer would agree...
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ApolloNight In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 07:15:58 +0000 UTC]
ooooh, I've had that happen to me before. You can get some new wires pretty cheep on Amazon.
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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2013-01-13 08:42:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm waring ot taking it apart for something like that.. the wire on mine isn't a removable usb...
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ApolloNight In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 17:09:22 +0000 UTC]
oooooh.... thats not good...
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Atrieisan In reply to ApolloNight [2013-01-13 22:20:52 +0000 UTC]
no.. sadly it isn't... =~=;
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xXBookNinjaXx In reply to ??? [2013-01-13 06:36:59 +0000 UTC]
Wait, I'm confused. Is Danny a phantasum or a ghost because that's phantasm energy (as seen in an earlier picture), which is diffrent than ghost energy, right? (is Danny's mouth green? That cool.)
In other news...
This picture is really great! That pose is... Wow, amazing. I love the way that you drew the jacket, or vest with a hood.
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Atrieisan In reply to xXBookNinjaXx [2013-01-13 06:43:03 +0000 UTC]
Danny is a Phantasm in T.A. Technically he should be a ghost... but there was some.. meddling involved... Yes that is ethereal flame. And yes his mouth is green. I feel like being a science nerd when it comes to the fact that your insides are mostly red cause of ur blood color. So his insides are green cause of his ectoplasm. -rolls around-
Hoodie-vests are win!
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xXBookNinjaXx In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 08:41:33 +0000 UTC]
Ohhhhh, I get it now! Thanks! Now that you pointed out it makes total since, would that mean he blushes green too? Yes, yes they are. ^^
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Atrieisan In reply to xXBookNinjaXx [2013-01-13 08:44:38 +0000 UTC]
Yush! Green blushies are so cute!
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ShiroHichi891 In reply to ??? [2013-01-13 06:34:53 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful. Simply wonderful. I was grinning like an idiot the whole time I was reading the small story you put along with the picture. Gotta love Danny's short attention span and temper. You've just made me that much more excited for you to post the next page in Time's Apprentice.
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Atrieisan In reply to ShiroHichi891 [2013-01-13 06:44:22 +0000 UTC]
Yays.
And Danny is just a young teen, so a lot of things either overwhelm him or he loses interest in. that or he might just have ADHD. ._. ....
Clockwork is such a bastard to him.
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ShiroHichi891 In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 06:49:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I can see him having ADHD for sure. XD Gotta love all of Clockwork's little antics that will always piss Danny off though.
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Atrieisan In reply to ShiroHichi891 [2013-01-13 06:56:25 +0000 UTC]
I can too actually. He's so hyper and always has to have something to do, that doesn't bore him though.
And Clockwork's anics can piss anyone off when they're directed at them. <<
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ShiroHichi891 In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 07:03:47 +0000 UTC]
It would explain so much.
And that is why he is one of my favorite characters. Just because he can piss anyone off so easily.
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ellincrain [2013-01-13 06:19:16 +0000 UTC]
I don't have that much time to read the story right now, but I love the picture!
The pose is really interesting and I love the costume you made for him. I especially like the hood/jacket. (I'm pretty sure I saw that in another picture.)
The story seems interesting, I'll go back and read it later.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-13 06:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Read it whenever you have time to my friend. As for the hoodie-vest. It's kind of what personafies the T.A. Danny fromt he rest. :3
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 07:48:11 +0000 UTC]
I read the description. Sounds really interesting. I don't often read fanfictions or fanstories (although I have been reading them since the past few days for my comic project I'm working on) but there are some very few ones that capture my attention. I can almost imagine what happens next. Danny getting frustrated, Danny failing, Danny trying to use his wits to succeed, and Clockwork enjoying every second of it. I'd really like to see that.
I love it when people change his costume in fanarts. His original thing just looks really tight and awkward to wear and I keep looking at his crotch.
But yeah, your version would be one of my favorite changes in his costume. Simple, like you can wear it in public, but different enough so that you wouldn't expect to see it in public. I wish you put in his "D" logo on it, though. I always though of that as his symbol. And I just recently realized that it was both and "D" and a "P" which makes it all the more fitting.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-13 08:41:26 +0000 UTC]
He does actually have the "DP" logo on him. It's just on the back of the hoodie vest. And I agree with you though about the outfoot looking really awkward in some drawing styles... I felt I needed to change it because of that exact reason. <<
I'm glad you enjoyed the fic btw. Though it's not really an intro as much as it was a short story that's left open ended to leave readers to their imagination. Exactly like what you just mentioned. lawl. And C.W. would indeed love every minute of it. My sis mentioned one with him opening the fridge to find Danny in there having hoped to ambush him, fallen asleep. So he just picked up a drink and closed the door on him. lol
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 09:03:52 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. I usually change his outfit into something weird in my crack comics. To avoid drawing the crotch. I need to think of someway to make fun of that.
So you're not going to continue this? Aha, my prediction skills are... something something... I can't think of a good metaphor so I'm just going to leave that blank. I find that fridge thing adorable. I can imagine Danny trying to attack him randomly and Clockwork just ignoring him and pretending nothing was happening. And on the inside, he would be laughing.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-13 09:12:54 +0000 UTC]
This was just a short vignette. Kind of a one shot of something that would happen between Clockwork and Danny but I wouldn't be able to fit it into the T.A. storyline. Considering that the T.A. storyline is the real deal. I just had this running around in my head for a while and figured I needed to post it before I forgot it.
And yeah, he'd be laughing on the inside. The point of the lesson was for Danny to figure out a bit of forsight; plan ahead and know your opponent sort of thing. Clockwork just goes about doing 'normal' things and just seems to know when Danny's coming and just drops down to pick something up when danny flings past, ect. lawl
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 09:21:24 +0000 UTC]
Ah. I always have little stories that I want to fit into my comics, but can't. This is a really nice way to put it out. I would attempt to copy you, but I don't often write. I usually only do comics. Sometimes one-panel comics. Also I might be too lazy.
Ah, there goes my prediction streak. I had a sneaking suspicion that Clockwork was trying to teach Danny to be crafty and think outside the box. And to not be predicable. I can really imagine something like this in a television episode.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-13 22:23:50 +0000 UTC]
You're prediction streak isn't far off though. He does tell Danny to try and think outside the box when the boy is frustrated by the whole thing. lawl. I could totally see this in an episode! Sadly I'm not all that good at animating...
And I can understand the not writing often part. I do write occasionally... but it is time consuming and frustrates me...
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 00:19:16 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, man. It's like I got ESPN or something. (Mean Girls quote. Couldn't resist.) But yeah.
I'm trying to animate but it's driving me insane. After I finish my current animation, I'm just going to do comic animations for awhile. I also really need to get a real animating studio. I'm just using Vegas Movie Studio right now. I don't think it's working as good as it should be.
I used to want to be a writer. My sister is a journalist-to-be and my father is a novelist/movie writer, I think. But then I realized how lazy I was when it came to writing. Then I started going on DeviantArt and drawing crack comics and I realized I rather be a comic writer or animator. But I'd say my writing skills are still decent. I could probably make some fanfictions if I tried hard enough.
I rather just talk to people though. Or give summaries to anyone who wants it.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-14 06:04:45 +0000 UTC]
Animation is a difficult process. I still can't wrap my head around it. o.e
Writing can be hard at times too, from needing enough content, to winding up having too much content. <<
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 06:08:43 +0000 UTC]
It's mostly a matter of patience for me right now. Make his hand move an inch to the right... Make it move another inch, and another inch..... Very time consuming.
Oh, yeah, I know what you mean. I always have these incredibly intricate ideas and then I have to cut some things out and then I end up cutting out too much.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-14 06:11:43 +0000 UTC]
I've been writing out these technicals right now cause there's no way I could express half of the information stewing in my head upon my comic unless it was a couple thousand pages long. =~=;
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 06:14:26 +0000 UTC]
I should write out my ideas. I always forget them. And then I don't do them. I've probably lost hundreds of ideas in the dark vortex of the unseen part of my mind...
A thousand page long comic. I think I'd forget the ending before I get there, if I try that.
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Atrieisan In reply to ellincrain [2013-01-14 07:08:00 +0000 UTC]
The irony is whenyou have the beginning and the end but havn't figured out how to get from one end to the other. <<
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ellincrain In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 07:16:39 +0000 UTC]
I usually plan out the end first. That's how many of my stories start. But lately, I realized my biggest ideas aren't like that. I dunno how White Knight is even going to end.
I just had a small idea for a scene and worked around that. What happens next, what happened before that. Then I try to link it to what I already have. So for me, I've been trying to string together a bunch of idea that may or may not have anything to do with each other. It's not working. But it will eventually.
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kyarathehedgehog In reply to ??? [2013-01-13 05:24:46 +0000 UTC]
love the backstory to this picture. and i can understand the pose problem @.@ i think i have more trouble with poses than anything else in my drawings. it turned out really good ^^
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Atrieisan In reply to kyarathehedgehog [2013-01-13 06:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Poses are troublesome when they want to be. I've managed to pick up a few tricks when it comes to defining the line of motion to help, but sometimes it just doesn't come out like ur mind wants it to... His legs still urk me. <<
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kyarathehedgehog In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-13 06:21:18 +0000 UTC]
yup. i i've been working on a drawing with a difficult pose recently.. took me 15 tries to get the arm positions just right. eh well practice makes perfect and references always come in handy
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Atrieisan In reply to kyarathehedgehog [2013-01-13 06:27:40 +0000 UTC]
practice practice practice! Indeed it takes a long time to get it right, but once things stick, you're amazed.
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DB-KT [2013-01-13 05:21:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh Danny... You and that short temper of yours. ^^
Nice little story by the way.
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Atrieisan In reply to DB-KT [2013-01-13 06:09:48 +0000 UTC]
-shrugs- He's an impatient teenager. What else could be expected. lol
Danny: I'm NOT that imapatient!
C.W. : Yes you are...
Danny: Say that again....
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