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Description This was one hell of a pose to pull off.

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The turn of a page, the scribbling of a quill upon parchment, the endless tick of clocks; these sounds echoed on within his mind, unable to focus any longer upon the volumes that lay before him. Danny sighed, closing the book in front of him, giving up on trying to decipher any more of the text. He'd lost track of the hours he'd spent sitting there attempting to scramble through the sheer amount of homework he'd procrastinated on... no doubt the time keeper wasn't going to be pleased with him...

The crick of the door opening caused the teen to jolt upright within his chair, banging his knee upon the desk. Muttering a few curses before finding himself pulled out of his thoughts by a familiar chuckle. ...forget speaking.... Even think of the devil and the devil shall come.... A scowl crossed his face as he turned his emerald gaze upwards to catch ruby one of his teacher. The man in question seeming relatively amused.

"Taking a break already?" The time master looked over the ruffled teen, still amused. He'd expected such.

"Well forgive me if I can't focus after a few hours... I'm not my sister after all...." The teen in question let a snarl curl on his lips as he spoke. But then it hit him... the recognition of his words; his gaze becoming downcast as the turned back towards his studies in subdued silence. It had been so long since he had seen Jazz... his parents... his friends...

The air of misery hung for a long while between the two spirits. Enough time for Clockwork to have shifted from child to elder and back again in several intervals as the young phantasm attempted to burry his emotions within the numerous books in front of him. He figured it was time to break the tension and turn the child's attention elsewhere.

"Daniel..."

"What..."

"I have an assignment for you."

Those very words nearly had the boy falling out of his chair. His form whirled round with a rather mutinous expression.

"Seriously? What now? Some essay I have to write with even more books I can barely decipher?!" Danny was all but fuming. Another pause, the air once again holding that constricting feeling between them before the time keeper once again broke it.

"Not in the slightest." A smirk visibly placed itself upon his usually stoic face as he watched the boy. The snowy haired teen shifting between different expressions, from anger to confusion, from confusion to dread.

"Is it some obnoxious equation...."

"No."

"Meditating?"

"Nope."

"Um..... a worm hole?"

"Where ever did you get that idea?" He just raised brow at the boy. Sometimes he could only ponder on where the child pulled such strange ideas out from. Danny just sighed in frustration, he hated it when the older spirit played these games on him.

"What is it then..?"

"Tired of guessing already?"

"That's not funny..."

Clockwork chuckled at this, simply mused, his gaze having shifted towards reading over the titles of the tomes upon the shelf somewhere during the conversation. He let his fingertips run along them as he perused the names with only half interest. He was simply waiting to see how long it would take before Daniel lost his patience again, which wouldn't take long; but it was something the boy would have to learn to overcome. He let the moment hang, only briefly glancing over at the younger spirit to gage how far he could push him before he decided it was time to let up. Just before the teen was about to open his mouth and yell at him to answer he spoke.

"I have a feeling you will enjoy this one."

"As far as I can tell.. I haven't enjoyed any of this..." Danny scowled, his arms spreading out to gesture to the confines of the room and numerous study materials.

"Then a good vent should be affective then." He mused once more, pulling a tome off the shelf and proceeded to open it to a random page. He knew as well as Daniel did that he was playing a game with him, but it was a necessity to have to boy frustrated with him if the lesson was to fulfill its purpose.

"Huh...?" The teen just stared over at the male whom was pretending to ignore him. A look of blank confusion visible upon his face as he attempted to decipher his teacher's words, "What are you getting at...?"

"Hit me."

"WHAAAAAAT?!?!" Danny couldn't help himself, the sheer blank expression that held on Clockwork's face as he said such words left him more than a little flabbergasted. As far as the time keeper was concerned, he just kept the same dead serious poker face.

"As simple as I put it. I want to you try and land a successful hit on me, " he closed the book with a snap, emphasizing his point as his gaze remained fixated upon the teen's wide eyed stare.

"But.. I .. um... whaa...." He couldn't get himself to form a complete sentence, his mind simply wouldn't allow it at that moment. The very thoughts that swam through his head or even the notion that his teacher would be so masochistic to even suggest such a thing left him speechless. However he just barely managed to pull his mind back into reality as the head of the time master's staff swung itself at his face.

Skidding backwards across the stone floor with a hiss, he glowered over at him, his teeth slightly bared, "What the hell was that for?!"

"We don't have all day now... And if you won't come of your own volition I shall invoke it," he pointed the staff at Danny in a threatening manner. The teen's eyes widening in understanding. Clockwork was dead serious, and if he didn't oblige he wasn't going to be allowed to simply walk out of the room.

"Fine! But don't blame me when this is over!" He cried, lunging forth to charge the older spirit. The spirit in question smirking once more, the look of playful mischief in his eyes as he spun away from the teen's claws at the last second. The boy in question finding himself slamming face first into the bookshelf.

"Did I forget to mention you have a month for this assignment?" The time keeper simply chuckled, giving the staff a twirl.

"WWWWHHHAAAAAAAATTTTT?!?!?!?"
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Comments: 98

MARoy [2020-04-30 23:51:50 +0000 UTC]

i cant decide what i like more the story or the amazing artΒ 

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Sammyiscool [2018-08-04 23:43:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this AU!!!

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CoNSu [2016-10-02 20:49:53 +0000 UTC]

Love the pose. So dinamic.

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YukiKanda23 [2016-04-09 23:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Are you gonna make the Time Apprentice into a fanfic as well? With the other phantasms if the two stories are related

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Atrieisan In reply to YukiKanda23 [2016-04-10 12:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Possibly. It might play out better and faster than trying to do it by comic page... I don't think people realize that I spent about 9 to 15 hours per panel on those pages...

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Luna-Phantom [2015-09-16 22:45:20 +0000 UTC]

I love this! It's too perfect.

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KenshinSegarra [2015-06-26 03:24:45 +0000 UTC]

Have fun Daniel

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boybuster2 [2014-12-24 19:17:04 +0000 UTC]

this is like Bleach when Ichigo was learning his zanpacto's name

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Kiomori [2014-09-26 04:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Something tells me Clockwork will troll him the whole time (while training him!) and not let the kid land a hit until the very end of the month.Β 

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ZoneRobotnik [2014-09-13 22:32:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh, practical homework is the worst. XD

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bibliophilea [2014-04-02 23:54:41 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic! XD
A month! And WHAT-ing that could rival the Tenth Doctor!
And the picture is absolutely brilliant! Will you use it (or something similar) in your comic?

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Atrieisan In reply to bibliophilea [2014-04-03 01:46:50 +0000 UTC]

This is kind of a short story that casts off of the comic story. Essentially a drabble into the inside life of the characters that doesn't fit into the tight knit space of the storyline.

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Moshe30350 In reply to Atrieisan [2015-04-26 23:42:08 +0000 UTC]

that my friend is badass

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ZASohm [2014-02-13 23:51:52 +0000 UTC]

would you mind terribly if I borrowed some of your Danny's look for a FanFiction I am writing? I had different, more traditional concept worked out for the story but, stumbling upon this while looking for a suitable Clockwork base to work with, I find the urbanized look more appropriate for the Danny I am writing than what I had in mind? I would be altering it a bit in my description but the base would be there and I would include a link to your image and a note giving you full credit of course. I just like having a image that readers can connect to the character.Β 

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Atrieisan In reply to ZASohm [2014-02-14 17:32:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm alright with that. Considering it's a written work. :3

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ZASohm In reply to Atrieisan [2014-02-14 20:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I really do appreciate the consideration. When I get around to posting the first chapters of the story I will link it to you in case you want to see what is being done with the design.

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Sasukes-Shadow [2013-08-25 16:31:39 +0000 UTC]

Have fun daniel

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superaustin15 [2013-07-30 21:16:11 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Tavirnth [2013-07-01 00:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Uhhhhh.... there are no bookshelfs in the pic. I love the pic a lot just thought I would point out the no bookshelf since in the story he hit one using his face.

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ShadowDragonn [2013-03-26 18:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Love this!
I love the composition, the expressions, dynamics and the poses! xD The story too! Nice piece of work! Really well done!

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ShadowDragonn [2013-03-26 18:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Love this!

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zehry [2013-03-04 13:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Will you continue this? I really like it. It sounds promising

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Atrieisan In reply to zehry [2013-03-04 17:12:04 +0000 UTC]

This was just a short gag story that I wouldn't be able to fit into the main story line for the Time's Apprentice Comic.

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Alex-Ghost [2013-02-27 23:15:16 +0000 UTC]

This is pure brilliance XD

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AkaChibi13 [2013-02-08 01:08:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG, I love this.
Clockwork's all like, "Come at me, bro," and Danny's like, "ARG!" and I'm like, "BWAHAHAHA! IT'LL NEVER HAPPEN! AHAHAHA!" unless Clockwork lets it happen, since he already knows every move that Danny's going to make. *snickers*

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Atrieisan In reply to AkaChibi13 [2013-02-08 03:50:35 +0000 UTC]

That is exactly it. lawl Clockwork knows every move he'll make. So he's trying to get Danny to learn how to anticipate his opponent's actions.

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krazii1331 [2013-01-27 09:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh man... You are so cruel to Danny-boy... Does he actually manage to land a hit eventually?

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Atrieisan In reply to krazii1331 [2013-01-27 18:13:50 +0000 UTC]

The actual point of the lesson was to teach Danny foresight. Figure out how your opponent works and to predict their next move and act accordingly. Whether or not he laid a hit wasn't actually important, at least not in CW's opinion.

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krazii1331 In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-28 02:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for explaining it. Good luck on your comic.

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Chameleon-Doodles [2013-01-22 15:44:24 +0000 UTC]

SO COOL!!! ^_^

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moonlitinuyasha1985 [2013-01-20 02:00:28 +0000 UTC]

I like this story.

The pic's good, too!

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myaibou [2013-01-16 12:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Love the drawing! Really interesting!

The story is very intriguing as well. I like the idea of Clockwork as a kind of master/teacher to Danny. You do a lot of "headhopping," though. Pick one character and stick with their POV throughout the chapter or section. It's very distracting to be in Clockwork's POV one second and Danny's the next. Also, watch for minor things like punctuation (a quote should end with a period, not a comma, if what follows is not some variation on "he said."

("As simple as I put it. I want to you try and land a successful hit on me, " he closed the book with a snap, emphasizing his point as his gaze remained fixated upon the teen's wide eyed stare.)

That should be a comma after "me." ("...hit on me." He closed the book...) If it were, "...hit on me," he said, then it would be a comma. (Although the way you have it is much better, following with an action is vastly preferable then "he said.")

This could get very interesting!

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Atrieisan In reply to myaibou [2013-01-16 17:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tips. It can be difficult to wrap my head around writing styles sometimes.

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myaibou In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-17 19:15:03 +0000 UTC]

NP. I saw you requested critiques, and since I am not skilled enough to critique art, I commented on the area I know.

POV can be tricky, but once you start paying attention to it, it becomes natural to stick in one POV at a time.

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Atrieisan In reply to myaibou [2013-01-18 03:21:20 +0000 UTC]

I still appreciate your comment. I'll try working out a few things when I write future works. It was just hard nto to jump around in this. .__.;

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chillydragon [2013-01-16 06:49:09 +0000 UTC]

THE POSE!!!!

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Tigerjump71 [2013-01-15 20:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Dix dollars ce Clockwork alle triche, oui?

English: Ten dollars Clockwork will cheat, yes?

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Atrieisan In reply to Tigerjump71 [2013-01-15 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]

He always cheats. XD

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vedisdragon [2013-01-14 20:48:47 +0000 UTC]

DAT POSE
Pfftt it might as well take Danny more than a month to land a good hit on CW.

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Atrieisan In reply to vedisdragon [2013-01-14 20:53:25 +0000 UTC]

And after failing the assignment he'd have Danny write an essay on why he failed it. trolololo

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vedisdragon In reply to Atrieisan [2013-01-14 20:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Just to rub it in? XD

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Atrieisan In reply to vedisdragon [2013-01-14 21:02:55 +0000 UTC]

Exactly~ That and give him some understanding into what he has to learn.

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GhostWolfHybrid [2013-01-13 23:48:34 +0000 UTC]

DANNNYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! lol, so many questions for dannyXD

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WhiteAltan [2013-01-13 21:19:42 +0000 UTC]

That story was just hilarious; you've nailed Clockwork and Daniel's personalities perfectly.
Great job with the picture too. The poses look great. ^^

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Atrieisan In reply to WhiteAltan [2013-01-13 22:10:51 +0000 UTC]

My thanks. Personally I think that the T.A. Clockwork is slightly more expressive in his mischief. Thoguh that may just be my writing style.. I dunno. I'm glad you enjoyed tie fic.

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Xxshatteredworld92xX [2013-01-13 19:06:23 +0000 UTC]

"Hit me."

"WHAAAAAAT?!?!"

I can just picture this expression on his face.

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Atrieisan In reply to Xxshatteredworld92xX [2013-01-13 22:11:06 +0000 UTC]

OMG That's hilarious!

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BlueStar95 [2013-01-13 18:30:27 +0000 UTC]

The picture looks awesome and you really got Danny in character in the story.

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Aerypear [2013-01-13 17:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol. he's pretty cruel for one so ageless. XD
*glomps danny in mid air* "DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYYYY!

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Atrieisan In reply to Aerypear [2013-01-13 22:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Danny: -squeaks and flails- EEEEIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!


Clockwork is cruel. Especially when he's bored. lol

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