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A short made for Albino Blacksheep's Tournament of Flash Artists (TOFA 2012).Round 4 Theme - Character Origins
Challenges:
- Protagonist must have characteristic strengths and weaknesses
- Characters used in the short must be newly designed (no characters made before the date of September 8, 2012)
Opponent this round:
Thoughts:
"For the final round of TOFA, I needed to do something really special. I took a huge risk in the previous round, and I got the feeling that the judges thought I was playing it too safe or plateauing. That perhaps they thought I would be relying heavily on the voice talent to carry my cartoons.
I took that as a challenge. I needed to surprise the judges.
I jossed a few ideas around, such as the concept of silly superhero, Salt Lick (has a super tongue, is weakened by deer). Partway through writing the script I realized it wasn't going to work; it was still too dialogue heavy, and predictably silly.
I threw it out, after 5 days of sitting on the idea, leaving me with only 16 days to make a cartoon from scratch.
I decided to do a story with no dialogue, feeling that if I wanted to make it as an animator and really wow the judges, I'd need to convey a story with emphasis on visual storytelling. Something emotional; simple but profound.
This is the result. I hope it surprises some of you.
Enjoy."
I'd like to give a shout-out to these guys for sticking with me while I worked on this, and who gave me the support to make one last cartoon:
Also, I may have forgotten to mention that this cartoon won me the championship.
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Comments: 86
dantiscus [2012-12-04 13:59:41 +0000 UTC]
such sad music...and such cute story รณwรฒ...great job ..BAD (black) CAT!!! *SLAPPPY! *
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Atrox-C In reply to dantiscus [2012-12-06 03:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Cats can be so mean sometimes.
Glad you like it!
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IntrovertedPencil [2012-12-04 11:34:05 +0000 UTC]
That was very good, enjoyed it a whole lot.
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Atrox-C In reply to IntrovertedPencil [2012-12-06 04:00:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Alz! I'm really happy to hear that, and for that matter, to hear from you again!
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IntrovertedPencil In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-06 11:04:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've been completely away from dA and drawing for months now. Just can't seem to find the time anymore.
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Atrox-C In reply to IntrovertedPencil [2012-12-08 20:28:33 +0000 UTC]
Well, at least you're still drawing. That's good!
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KimmotMan [2012-12-04 01:30:42 +0000 UTC]
Bravo! I really enjoyed this touching animation.Really contrasts from your previous flash cartoons. In fact I loved them all. Amazing job dude
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Atrox-C In reply to KimmotMan [2012-12-06 04:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Kevin! Yeah, I really wanted to do something that would stand out from the last few rounds. I usually don't like going for the sappy stories, but the idea just begged to be animated when it crossed my mind.
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NuclearMime In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 00:00:54 +0000 UTC]
Bawgh it's so touching every time I see it.
Something I never mentioned before: I absolutely adore the cat's design and movements. Very spectre-like. It's music is super appropriate as well on so many levels.
I just love our protagonist so much baw poor thing. ;~;
Thanks for the shout-out and congrats on winning!
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Atrox-C In reply to NuclearMime [2012-12-08 20:19:57 +0000 UTC]
Aw, gee. I'm still very glad you like it, even though you've seen it a billion times. XD
Yeah, I wanted the cat to feel more like a scary entity than just a cat. Looks like i did alright with that. The music isn't perfect, but it's hard to imagine seeing the film with a totally different track now; it's take it as its own!
No prob! And Thanks!
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draton01 In reply to ??? [2012-12-03 21:35:06 +0000 UTC]
just amazing, i almost cry, seriously! its so beautiful, so heartwarming! so original, its so, so, well, i have no words to describe the feelings this animation gives to me, i just can say, thank you, thanks for giving us this great minutes of joyness!
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Atrox-C In reply to draton01 [2012-12-08 20:26:46 +0000 UTC]
Darn! I wanted a full-on cry! Oh well, almost crying is just as good.
Haha, thank you!
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SugarJoySpark In reply to ??? [2012-12-03 18:10:15 +0000 UTC]
That was very beautiful. I see why you said I'd love this one. : )
Backgrounds were really well made, it seem like you improved dramatically in creating backgrounds for this film, and the story of little paper kid fighting to be alive just to reach her 'sister' in the end, that was really wonderful!
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Atrox-C In reply to SugarJoySpark [2012-12-08 20:28:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Without having to write any witty dialogue, i could focus more on telling the story through visuals, and I believe it allowed me more time to focus on making some good backgrounds.
I'm glad you liked it.
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SugarJoySpark In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-09 04:28:49 +0000 UTC]
That is very nice experience you earned doing such a thing like this, I love that!
I'm glad I get to see another of your great animations : D
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Deadmen23-3 [2012-12-03 15:29:37 +0000 UTC]
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccccccccccccccccccccccccccceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee work man
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Atrox-C In reply to SeseMiroh [2012-12-05 08:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Man, that icon makes me laugh every time. XD
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TaRtOoN-Man94 [2012-12-03 11:32:04 +0000 UTC]
it's a good thing this was without dialouge, because I am at a loss of words to describe how good it is!
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Atrox-C In reply to TaRtOoN-Man94 [2012-12-05 08:02:07 +0000 UTC]
That's all you need to say!
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TaRtOoN-Man94 In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-05 17:00:08 +0000 UTC]
The story is on par with a Pixar short!
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PHLiM2 [2012-12-03 10:34:38 +0000 UTC]
I have nothing to say. This is absolutely beautiful.
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Atrox-C In reply to PHLiM2 [2012-12-05 08:00:48 +0000 UTC]
That's all I need to hear... er, read.
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PHLiM2 In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-05 17:28:26 +0000 UTC]
:3 Seriously though, when it comes to cartoons I always look for the animation or storyline. This has a balanced combination of the two.
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TheSuperGamingArtist [2012-12-03 09:16:00 +0000 UTC]
*Adds it to favorites.*
I really enjoyed watching the making of this short on Livestream.
You should do it more often or whenever you feel like doing it.
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Atrox-C In reply to TheSuperGamingArtist [2012-12-05 06:22:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, joy!
Maybe I will! If I can find the time to! XD
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TheSuperGamingArtist In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-11 01:54:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
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NixieSeal In reply to ??? [2012-12-03 09:08:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that had me crying. Great job, especially for a silent short film.
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Atrox-C In reply to NixieSeal [2012-12-05 06:22:28 +0000 UTC]
The way I figured, I bet a lot of people expected me to do something bizarre or comical again. I like to think I surprised those people and showed them I can do more than that.
Thank you!
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NixieSeal In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-05 12:33:10 +0000 UTC]
It was still bizarre, but definitely not comical!
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RWappin [2012-12-03 08:29:48 +0000 UTC]
I've said it before and I'll say it again: a DAMN fine cartoon!
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Atrox-C In reply to RWappin [2012-12-05 06:20:20 +0000 UTC]
Aw, gee Ryan. All I ever wanted was to be accepted by the likes of you, and to make up for my poor showing in TOFA 2010. This confirms it for me, so I'm really glad you liked it!
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