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Published: 2012-12-03 08:03:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 4154; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 39
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A short made for Albino Blacksheep's Tournament of Flash Artists (TOFA 2012).Round 4 Theme - Character Origins
Challenges:
- Protagonist must have characteristic strengths and weaknesses
- Characters used in the short must be newly designed (no characters made before the date of September 8, 2012)
Opponent this round:
Thoughts:
"For the final round of TOFA, I needed to do something really special. I took a huge risk in the previous round, and I got the feeling that the judges thought I was playing it too safe or plateauing. That perhaps they thought I would be relying heavily on the voice talent to carry my cartoons.
I took that as a challenge. I needed to surprise the judges.
I jossed a few ideas around, such as the concept of silly superhero, Salt Lick (has a super tongue, is weakened by deer). Partway through writing the script I realized it wasn't going to work; it was still too dialogue heavy, and predictably silly.
I threw it out, after 5 days of sitting on the idea, leaving me with only 16 days to make a cartoon from scratch.
I decided to do a story with no dialogue, feeling that if I wanted to make it as an animator and really wow the judges, I'd need to convey a story with emphasis on visual storytelling. Something emotional; simple but profound.
This is the result. I hope it surprises some of you.
Enjoy."
I'd like to give a shout-out to these guys for sticking with me while I worked on this, and who gave me the support to make one last cartoon:
Also, I may have forgotten to mention that this cartoon won me the championship.
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Comments: 86
goosetooth [2016-02-16 07:48:09 +0000 UTC]
So sweet wow ; ; this should be entered in a film festival
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Namicat101 [2014-12-12 13:10:31 +0000 UTC]
You have given me a reason to hoard paper and never throw it away.
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CREATIVECONCEPT12 [2014-12-05 07:47:25 +0000 UTC]
What program did you use for the animation? Also great story
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CREATIVECONCEPT12 In reply to Atrox-C [2014-12-12 08:28:56 +0000 UTC]
How do I work with flash? Can you please tell me what I need to do to use it.
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ForgottenGlowX In reply to Atrox-C [2014-06-02 19:49:33 +0000 UTC]
oh such a heart warming story!
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ForgottenGlowX In reply to Atrox-C [2014-06-01 10:51:22 +0000 UTC]
well its very sad and heart warming
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ForgottenGlowX In reply to ForgottenGlowX [2014-06-02 00:28:25 +0000 UTC]
just so ss-s-s-ss-SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Greatest-Nightmare [2014-01-27 17:41:43 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! Truly a great video and it is so beautiful!
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Roger-Dog [2013-01-21 00:04:01 +0000 UTC]
WHAT AN INSPIRATION!
And a well-earned victory at that. Should have said this ages ago, but congratulations! LOVED the fact there was no dialogue, really showed how strong your work stands on its own. Great choice!
Stellar compositions on those scenes inside the trash bin too.
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Atrox-C In reply to Roger-Dog [2013-01-22 21:41:02 +0000 UTC]
Aw man, thank you! I've been thinking about submitting it to a local film festival, I'm really quite proud of it! I'm glad you like it.
You think so? I thought it would be important to give the scene a sense of loneliness and despair with a little light coming in. I guess I got it right!
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InkyFirefly [2012-12-24 05:26:26 +0000 UTC]
This is probably my favorite animated piece of yours' so far. Very beautiful story and animation! The additional touch-ups really help out too. I know TOFA was an extremely taxing task, but you pulled through it and certainly came out on top! I think that's just awesome! Congrats again, friend! <:
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Atrox-C In reply to InkyFirefly [2012-12-31 22:00:18 +0000 UTC]
Aw, it's a lot of people's favorites; including mine. TOFA was was pretty brutal, but I'm glad I had friends like you to help me get through it.
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InkyFirefly In reply to Atrox-C [2013-01-05 02:57:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww of course pal! You did really good!
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baddleebadd [2012-12-22 00:49:54 +0000 UTC]
This was an amazing piece. It nearly made me cry.
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Atrox-C In reply to baddleebadd [2012-12-23 20:45:52 +0000 UTC]
That was my intention, sorry. XD
Thank you! :>
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professorfandango [2012-12-18 23:08:03 +0000 UTC]
You neglected to mention that you WON with this cartoon! And very deserving it was too.
An ability to get a bit of pathos into a cartoon is always commendable.
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Atrox-C In reply to professorfandango [2012-12-18 23:16:56 +0000 UTC]
Oops. Well, I may as well add that bit of info now. I figured that's what the TOFA portrait was for. XD
Thanks, man! I'm really quite proud of this!
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L-yggdrall [2012-12-11 00:25:29 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah my favorite !!!, very good job for this animation.
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Atrox-C In reply to L-yggdrall [2012-12-11 04:21:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, L-yggdrall! Hope you have time to enter TOFA again next year!
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AgentC-24 [2012-12-10 20:41:11 +0000 UTC]
Very very sweet. That was genuinely entertaining!
Your work on human-style characters here are impressive here too, as well as that cat. Top it off with your animation style as well as the great work on the paper physics, and you're really becoming a fantastic animator as well! Keep up the amazing work!
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BanditRingtail3 [2012-12-09 23:49:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That was...
Even if you don't win, it won't be for lack of effort or skill. You deserve a spot among the best.
Keep working for your dream. You are going to go somewhere.
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Atrox-C In reply to BanditRingtail3 [2012-12-11 04:25:21 +0000 UTC]
I take it you liked it, then? XD
Thanks man. I'll post an update VERY soon!
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BanditRingtail3 In reply to Atrox-C [2012-12-13 17:46:33 +0000 UTC]
I LOVED it! Please keep animating! I think you have what it takes to go places. ^.^
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Atrox-C In reply to BanditRingtail3 [2012-12-13 21:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! You bet I'll try!
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Jumbi [2012-12-09 16:34:28 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work. I think this one is my favorite of your entries, just because it stands out from the others so much.
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Atrox-C In reply to Jumbi [2012-12-11 02:36:33 +0000 UTC]
I agree. Not to boast or anything, but I think this shows I can do more than just silly stuff. People worried I would rely on the dialogue too much, and I like to prove people wrong. XD
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