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Published: 2007-01-24 18:13:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description This is another in the set I said I would be posting, written entirely in old english. I got bored with the modern version, so I did this. Enjoy and critique!
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Comments: 13

bitty-rogue [2007-01-26 01:58:52 +0000 UTC]

I like the picture. overcast days make me happy.

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attackbeaver In reply to bitty-rogue [2007-01-31 16:47:44 +0000 UTC]

All things grey or dark make you happy, but that's ok. Glad you liked it.

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bitty-rogue In reply to attackbeaver [2007-02-02 05:03:15 +0000 UTC]

things that appear dark to others aren't to me, but that's ok

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EarthHeavenAtmospher [2007-01-25 01:43:52 +0000 UTC]

I just love the photo. And the writing is great too, olde english was the way to go. The only thing I could complain about is maybe use a different font? Still, it's great .

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attackbeaver In reply to EarthHeavenAtmospher [2007-01-25 18:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Everyone is saying that, next set I'll fool around with it more. Thanks for the comments!

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blue-flamedpyro [2007-01-24 22:32:57 +0000 UTC]

I like the poem! You did very well with the Olde English x3 Fits with the photo well too.

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attackbeaver In reply to blue-flamedpyro [2007-01-25 18:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I actually think olde english is easy, so this was no big deal.

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blue-flamedpyro In reply to attackbeaver [2007-01-25 18:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Really? Lucky for you then.

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EmotionalNeko [2007-01-24 20:08:03 +0000 UTC]

It good! but I think you may have made a mistake... in the 7th line you repeated 'see the'

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attackbeaver In reply to EmotionalNeko [2007-01-24 22:00:36 +0000 UTC]

DAMN!

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EmotionalNeko In reply to attackbeaver [2007-01-25 04:09:03 +0000 UTC]

o.o .... is it fixable?

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attackbeaver In reply to EmotionalNeko [2007-01-31 16:46:31 +0000 UTC]

In a long while, yes. With much work.

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EmotionalNeko In reply to attackbeaver [2007-01-31 19:31:24 +0000 UTC]

ok well atleast it's fixable

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