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Published: 2006-12-12 18:24:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 136; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Watching the beautiful empty from your eyesSo pretty, so pretty. You have eyes of the sea and lips of the flame. Your hair speaks of a mystery untold; the mystery of a touch undiscovered. Your laugh told me of your joy, your inspiring emotion. The dancing sparkle of your dress seems to mar the beauty of your face. How you entertain and excite my senses, all but touch. For I must touch you not, nor stain your beauty with my base touch. So I mustΒ Β be content to sit in this ugly place watching you drift into a slumber eternal; haloed by the roses around you. Your now-ruby dress matches them, or do they match you? For whose beauty is greater? I sit to watch the beautiful empty from your eyes.
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Comments: 19
namteor [2006-12-13 08:02:55 +0000 UTC]
tam tam tam taaaa (my own theme song)
that's good man
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attackbeaver In reply to bitty-rogue [2006-12-17 18:00:45 +0000 UTC]
Get me a large katana! Naoz!
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bitty-rogue In reply to attackbeaver [2006-12-17 18:21:08 +0000 UTC]
*hands sword* ..yes..
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attackbeaver In reply to bitty-rogue [2006-12-18 17:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Good daughter! Now, get me a ps3!
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bitty-rogue In reply to attackbeaver [2006-12-19 06:32:48 +0000 UTC]
...yes*hands plastic blocks to you*.. p..s.. and three
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attackbeaver In reply to bitty-rogue [2006-12-19 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]
NO! A playstation three!
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bitty-rogue In reply to attackbeaver [2006-12-20 00:12:51 +0000 UTC]
...umm...*goes to sleep*
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sethnuva [2006-12-13 03:29:42 +0000 UTC]
jordan...you...are... pyscotic... but fuck your a good writer... so i will allow it
guess what...
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EmotionalNeko [2006-12-13 03:00:44 +0000 UTC]
HOLEY SHIT! that was good! I quite liked it if I do say so myself... wait... I do! ok... now I confuse myself greatly... anywho! good jobness!
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EarthHeavenAtmospher [2006-12-13 02:34:50 +0000 UTC]
You sir are very good at imagery .
I like how you say "I sit to watch the beautiful empty from your eyes" rather than "I sit to watch the beauty". Upholds the stalker/crazy person mood very well. Very good, very good work.
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attackbeaver In reply to EarthHeavenAtmospher [2006-12-13 22:42:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
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