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attackofthespoons — The Leaf
Published: 2008-02-28 03:49:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description A leaf falls silently.
Down a slowly moving stream.
The leaf becomes the stream.
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Comments: 5

writerinartistscloth [2008-02-29 02:24:31 +0000 UTC]

The first line is six syllables...
Though, looking past that, it's a really beautiful poem. You've expressed a feeling of tranquility in nature quite well.

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attackofthespoons In reply to writerinartistscloth [2008-02-29 04:25:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah I know but I couldn't find the right category to put this poem in! so I called it a haiku! and thank you. I try my best!

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Kimori [2008-02-28 20:59:37 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Sexy!!!! O_O TEH LEAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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attackofthespoons In reply to Kimori [2008-02-28 21:46:27 +0000 UTC]

I loveses it! it's awesome it's like the first haiku I didn't screw over!

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Kimori In reply to attackofthespoons [2008-02-29 00:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!

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