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Published: 2013-09-23 01:54:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1543; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 2
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Description I originally drew this on a canvas four times the size, but then the logo could hardly be seen, so I shrunk it to a more manageable size. XD I'll post the full, giant version sometime later. But meanwhile... w00t! RotG! I loved drawing Jack Frost and Mori from 's Shift comic. If any of you haven't read it yet, you should check it out. It'll give you something to do for the next half hour at least. XD (if you rush through the pages like I did.) I'll be doing touch-ups to this later, so it's not quite finished yet. Just wanted to get this out there. Tell me if there's anything you guys think I should tweak!

EDIT: I've made it a bit more refined and followed up on the tips people gave me. Let me know if there's more I can touch up on! I increased their 'auras', and I also changed the background a little bit, redoing the shading of the moon (still looks like crap... idk how to draw the moon... Dx) and the stars (also look like crap.) Hope you guys think the changes are good!
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Comments: 27

SilverFei [2013-10-29 05:53:25 +0000 UTC]

My mistake, I meant to say 2nd, don't hate! D:

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AurelianM In reply to SilverFei [2013-11-02 02:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. X) No problem, lol. 

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Makosharkman In reply to AurelianM [2014-06-09 08:07:19 +0000 UTC]

you want to know who I thought Mori was at first.

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SilverFei [2013-10-29 05:51:23 +0000 UTC]

congrats on 3rd place

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Stelza-chan [2013-10-19 10:56:32 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing!!!! You're so awesome! :square:

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AurelianM In reply to Stelza-chan [2013-10-19 15:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! <3

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Stelza-chan In reply to Stelza-chan [2013-10-19 10:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Oops! I mean

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detectivegirl15 [2013-10-15 13:48:05 +0000 UTC]

this looks so cool ^^ 

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AurelianM In reply to detectivegirl15 [2013-10-15 21:20:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks. ^^

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detectivegirl15 In reply to AurelianM [2013-10-16 16:56:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome ^^ 

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OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-23 04:26:07 +0000 UTC]

If you're looking for tips, I'd say make Mori's face a tad more masculine, as it looks too feminine.

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AurelianM In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-23 10:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^ I can definitely make Jack's hoodie less baggy, though, I'm not sure how to make Mori's face more masculine without just making his eyebrows thicker. 

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OrangeGreenConverse In reply to AurelianM [2013-09-23 12:04:57 +0000 UTC]

I think it's something about his mouth that looks odd to me.

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AurelianM In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-24 23:42:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I posted my somewhat fixed version. Does it look better? 

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OrangeGreenConverse In reply to AurelianM [2013-09-25 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]

It looks more natural now.

I'm sorry if I seemed a little harsh, I only intend to help.

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AurelianM In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-25 02:02:46 +0000 UTC]

Nah, not at all. ^^ It was actually helpful, since I didn't notice and I think it looks a lot better now. 

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AurelianM In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-24 00:39:40 +0000 UTC]

I guess it's because I curved his mouth up a lot just for the effect of looking really, really snarky. XD I'm fixing that, since it is a bit of an overexaggeration. 

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OrangeGreenConverse In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-23 04:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Also, Jack looks pretty chubby. While his hoodie sort of baggy, it's not so loose as to hide how skinny he is.

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OrangeGreenConverse In reply to OrangeGreenConverse [2013-09-23 04:28:21 +0000 UTC]

*hoodie is sort of baggy*

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LivingAliveCreator [2013-09-23 02:09:37 +0000 UTC]

This is SO good!

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AurelianM In reply to LivingAliveCreator [2013-09-23 02:11:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much. X3 I'm really glad you like it! Any tips for when I go back to fix it up? 

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LivingAliveCreator In reply to AurelianM [2013-09-23 09:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, not really, it looks fine to me!

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AurelianM In reply to LivingAliveCreator [2013-09-24 23:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Fixed it up a bit, regardless. XD Whaddaya think now? 

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LivingAliveCreator In reply to AurelianM [2013-09-25 02:35:36 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!

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AurelianM In reply to LivingAliveCreator [2013-09-25 03:22:03 +0000 UTC]

I just wish I could draw the moon. XD My brush isn't big enough for a perfect circle in SAI, and I don't really like Photoshop much since I haven't adjusted its brushes or anything. DX Any advice? 

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LivingAliveCreator In reply to AurelianM [2013-09-25 09:23:05 +0000 UTC]

You could look up a perfect circle of Google and just import it

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AurelianM In reply to LivingAliveCreator [2013-09-23 10:39:54 +0000 UTC]

XD That's nice to hear. 

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