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AuthenticLogic — Fare Well
Published: 2006-01-16 05:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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May you fare more well than I will be,My purpose here is like a novel,
In which the last chapter has been read,
And you find another good genre,
Much more interesting than the last,
And I have been put down, fare you well.
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If I didn't have this blasted headache, I would probably be able to find a deeper meaning drawing me to the poem, but for now, you'll have to suffice with this....
You can sense the tension in your writing, and because of your intro (description), the tension with the romantic genre. I'm really sorry you feel that way about love, but I can tell from your other pieces you've been hurt! I'm not sure how much, and how deep, but it's clear it was pretty bad! I'm very sorry for you, but I hope your poetry can help you get through this "depression," if you will, and then you can channel all of your inspiration and intensity somewhere else. But, never-the-less, you write amazing pieces.
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Wow, thanks.
With a headache? You must be an expert at analyzing poetry when you're feeling good 
Thanks again.
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"work" and "they are" is a bad argument, and should be separated by a comma, not a period, otherwise they're both fragments.
You're lucky I'm not an English teacher or I'd get out my paddle...
Just kidding 
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lol. Right. Well, when I type these comments out, I don't really worry about grammer...but perhaps I should :hmmm:
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this=good, interesting idea
...looking on the bright side, at least it's a kind of inspiration for your writing...but I guess that doesn't do much to console you, huh?
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It doesn't but I really appreciate the attempt.
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you know it, I'm here for ya buddy 
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