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AuthenticLogic — I am One of Me
Published: 2006-02-16 04:02:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description When they look at me, they see a boy
Not one sees me

When I look at them, I see people
Are they me?

When we look at each other, we see us
Them or me?

How can I be one of them, yet they
Not one of me?

I search and search and realize that
Only I am one of me.
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Comments: 3

SenselessDancer [2006-02-17 21:45:34 +0000 UTC]

To be completely honest, I get lost in the imagery presented. I can follow it well enough, but I feel as though there is a hidden image/message here that I'm missing, and I just can't put my finger on it.

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AuthenticLogic In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-02-18 21:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Now we're even, now we've made each other feel stupid!

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SenselessDancer In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-02-19 21:51:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah...I guess we are even!!

But I refuse to believe that either one of us is stupid...we just got lost in the translation of the poems, somehow.

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