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Published: 2006-01-19 06:17:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Great monoliths move across the sky,Silent, completely unhindered by the eye.
Moving together in perfect unison,
Without emotion, without vision.
Unknown to their purpose, they move on,
Unaware that they will soon be gone.
Together they pour the nectar of light,
Never stopping to ponder their plight.
Drop, drop, it will soon stop.
Pitter, patter, it doesn=t matter.
Splish, splash, to the earth they crash.
Tinkle, Plop, it comes from the top.
These are the things that bring the gloom,
But these also cause the flowers to bloom.
The arcs that curve into bridges above,
The clouds to the sunlight push and shove.
The sprouts sprout in their beauty of green,
For all the world to see what is seen.
Let this not cause you any stress,
Let it open your mind to bless.
Drop, drop, why must it stop?
Pitter, patter, why does it matter?
Splish, splash, why into life they crash?
Tinkle, Plop, must it be from the top?
Comments: 9
crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-25 14:15:53 +0000 UTC]
.....
I...can't even remember what this was all about now Yes, my brain is quite the funny li'l thing, lol
but aw yeah, isch an awesome poem
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SenselessDancer [2006-01-24 21:30:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh WOW! This is such a magical piece. So romantic, and brilliant. I love the rhyming!!
Seriously, this piece is amazing! You are the sort of picture of the ancient romantic, aren't you? It makes for beautiful poetry I must say... (and I'm not quite sure why miss potatoe finds it kind of scary...but anyway). You make rain so beautiful, although, I must agree, spring rain, warm summer rain, the light drizzle that makes you smile, is pleasing, under the right circumstances of course. But I much prefer rain to snow... I hate cold!! BERRRRRRRRR!!
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AuthenticLogic In reply to SenselessDancer [2006-01-25 04:23:41 +0000 UTC]
Bleh, Miss Potatoe is excused from being sane, let's leave it at that .
And thanks again, very much.
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SenselessDancer In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-01-25 23:14:11 +0000 UTC]
lol. Your Welcome!! I really love your work!!
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crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-19 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]
you were cheerful *once*? I'm glad for you..........*tickles you to make you laff*
I like the visuals in this poem, the metaphors... the hem, "chorus" (couldn't come up with the word
) kinda scares me though...
.....but I'm not tellin you why!
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crazypotatoeOo In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-01-19 23:32:21 +0000 UTC]
The fever makin me think strange thoughtss...even stranger than usual
I was supposed to be going to sleep now
....well whatever.
I'm gonna staaaaaaaaayy for a while *hisssses*
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