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AuthenticLogic — Scarlet Summer
Published: 2006-01-03 23:11:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description When the bloody essence of daybreak drips into the river,
And the heavens cry out with an aphasic sympathy
Over the vast, wounded, merciless land without ears
So much tribulation, without any triumph
A deity of peace bringing blood red hate
With the end result as Death over Love
As Life is struck down, brutally swift
And bleeds into the great heavens
And leave the merciless land
What deity allows
Such horror to snuff
Living, breathing
Men of true
Virtue?
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Comments: 5

SenselessDancer [2006-01-21 00:34:21 +0000 UTC]

This poem is really good!! It has a good sense of imagery...I like it!

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AuthenticLogic [2006-01-15 01:53:00 +0000 UTC]

I hate writing to a structure myself
Sestina - not for me, oh no, not at all.

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crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-10 15:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Oo, I really like this poem, and the title; it's good ...so what does aphasic mean?

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AuthenticLogic In reply to crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-13 01:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Aphasic is like...in despair or wailing...you get it...DICTIONARY.COM

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crazypotatoeOo In reply to AuthenticLogic [2006-01-14 11:46:34 +0000 UTC]

oh, I'm soo stupid

... I get it. This is pro'ly my favorite type of poem, the kind you just write on sudden impulse: and this poem turned out amazingly.

That is really the only kind of poem I can write right now. No fancy structural compositions for me, oh no.

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