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Published: 2006-01-10 02:25:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 72; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Why must it bo so
That you are so close
Yet I am not able to
Touch your skin?

Why can I just not
Reveal to you all
The gathering pressure
Of feelings within?

Why do I fail to
Ask for the hand
that I so wish to hold
but can never win?

Why is our love
In such a way
As to be so very strong
And yet so thin?

Why are my lips
Unable to say
The three words that
Will reveal my sin?
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Comments: 4

SenselessDancer [2006-01-21 02:24:19 +0000 UTC]

This piece takes you deep within the emotion of the voice...is it your's? The subject means a lot to said person, and thus the emotion is really deep and exceptional... It's a brilliant piece!!

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crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-18 14:07:32 +0000 UTC]

We-ell, you already know where I stand on the love issue...but this is awesome! lots of feeling, and the structure-------
*eek,structure?heavenforbid* -------seriously, the "structure" totally works, and makes the whole thing sound great...*love* it.

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glamorousxtragedy [2006-01-10 02:38:37 +0000 UTC]

i like this a lot. its great. it expresses how i feel at this moment in time, because i gave liked the same guy for over a year, and yet he is my best friend... wow. i love it.

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AuthenticLogic In reply to glamorousxtragedy [2006-01-13 01:31:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it's one of the favorite ones that I've written .

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