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AuthenticLogic — Wind
Published: 2006-01-16 05:39:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description A gentle breeze of bliss,
Holding a wonderful, promising kiss.

Let it play across your face,
Soothing and lowering your heart's pace.

Allow the breath of God to calm,
and console your weary foot and palm.

Do not block this happiness,
Open your heart for the wind's caress.
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Comments: 3

SenselessDancer [2006-01-21 00:40:37 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem... I love the title, and the imagery... and I got it, the double entre I mean... It's a really good piece.

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crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-18 17:10:11 +0000 UTC]

'some mean rhyming you got goin' on there bud ^ ^

I like it, it's pretty Love again? must be tough... You should get a new muse

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AuthenticLogic In reply to crazypotatoeOo [2006-01-19 04:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Easier said than done .

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