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Published: 2005-02-24 07:42:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 891; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Perseverance dons the burden of life,
So blistering is it to bear;
To reprieve depressions of yesterday's strife
It cries, "For tomorrow we prepare!"

Whence undeterred by the disgruntled need
When humanity offers less,
So it stands tall for every man to heed:
Only with effort comes success.
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jennifer-darknight [2005-02-27 01:37:35 +0000 UTC]

It's a nice quote to put on a hallmark card; cute and catchy. I like it!

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Autom In reply to jennifer-darknight [2005-02-28 04:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.. Hallmark, but for what kind of occasion? Thanks, Jennifer.

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jennifer-darknight In reply to Autom [2005-03-01 01:31:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem...

But the occasion? Kind of a "Never give up, even when things are feeling sad" kind of thing. ^_^

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Autom In reply to jennifer-darknight [2005-03-14 02:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Ah, those. Always helps when you're feeling down, knowing that there's someone who cares watching over you.

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jennifer-darknight In reply to Autom [2005-03-14 04:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Yes! I always want those I love to know how I feel for them...and even though they don't know it...I like to write them poetry to show them how I feel. of course, most of them don't know the poems're about them.

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Autom In reply to jennifer-darknight [2005-03-15 05:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you don't know how much that sounds like what I do.. down to the part about the people in the poems not even knowing it's them.

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jennifer-darknight In reply to Autom [2005-03-15 21:29:23 +0000 UTC]

*Blushes a little bit* It's just the way I express myself...

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Autom In reply to jennifer-darknight [2005-03-16 21:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.. *reminds self to look over your gallery again*

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jennifer-darknight In reply to Autom [2005-03-16 23:52:48 +0000 UTC]

My stuff isn't that great...I wish it was, but then again, the only way my talent will grow is if I work hard and keep going.

Right?

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Autom In reply to jennifer-darknight [2005-03-17 06:37:36 +0000 UTC]

Exactly, it goes for everyone.. and that is what perseverance is all about (yeah, a little lame but hey).

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jennifer-darknight In reply to Autom [2005-03-17 12:39:07 +0000 UTC]

No, that's not lame at all...I can relate completely...

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ApocalypseUno [2005-02-24 15:04:15 +0000 UTC]

very nice mate , good rhyme on it

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Autom In reply to ApocalypseUno [2005-02-24 15:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, saved making the rhyme scheme as a finishing touch. Thank you for commenting.

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