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Published: 2005-02-24 08:19:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1163; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 32
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Description I see something shining
In those pretty eyes of yours,
Something that's also forming in mine;
After everything we've had and been through
We promised everything would be fine.

But nothing really was
As it seemed, and what I saw
Suddenly became so unclear;
Life became such a blur to me
Each and every time that we came near.

Droplets form between
Those two eyes of yours,
But please don't wipe them away;
In all our sadness and sorrows
These feelings are here to stay.

Come with me and let
These teardrops run together
And flow in an endless stream;
Our affections will always be remembered
Like the end of a forgotten dream.

But those tears hold fast to
That beautiful face of yours,
Clinging to a love that never wants to let go;
There are just so many things I want to tell you,
So much that I want to let you know:

I don't want us to part
Like this, if we had to go our
Separate paths you and I--
Because when that happens our tears will fall
The moment we say goodbye.
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Comments: 12

joejonasluvvv [2007-11-25 04:28:36 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Autom In reply to joejonasluvvv [2007-12-01 16:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Much appreciated.

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Joyblack007 [2006-09-07 04:57:46 +0000 UTC]

...You create a picture with your rhyme scheme that I never could. Great job.

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Autom In reply to Joyblack007 [2006-09-07 09:15:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. One of my approaches to writing this (and other pieces) is to convey these jumbles of mixed emotion through the use of simple, conversational word choice.

Let the words flow as tears...

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twiztidlilfreak [2006-03-15 00:16:32 +0000 UTC]

truly beautiful!!

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Autom In reply to twiztidlilfreak [2006-03-16 12:12:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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SpiritoCustode [2005-03-19 20:56:56 +0000 UTC]

awww thats so sweet. I really like it the pic brings a hole new feel to it to. its like you dont want to leave someone you love. awww

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elvata [2005-03-14 01:02:35 +0000 UTC]

....

*speechless*
... you took the words right out of my mouth...

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Autom In reply to elvata [2005-03-14 02:18:55 +0000 UTC]

I wrote a song based on this song, too.. could send you the link if you'd like. Thank you.

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elvata In reply to Autom [2005-03-14 02:22:10 +0000 UTC]

sure. Hook me up.

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GreyHawk12345 [2005-02-28 23:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow, just wow, thats awsome, the pic adds a load of detail to the poem, very nice job!!!

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Autom In reply to GreyHawk12345 [2005-03-14 02:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I like matching up illustrations to my poetry.. it helps convey the message if not enhance it.
Thanks!

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