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Published: 2008-07-24 05:43:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1880; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 51
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# 33. Hope, you still read this ^__^Russian:
Эшмун: Конечно, мне тебя не убить, сопляк. Но я могу оторвать твои руки и ноги.
Юзо: Э-это не слишком-то вежливо!
Эшмун: Кто это?!
Райя: Юзо, твоя мухобойка! Лови!!!
Эшмун: Маленькая смертная шлюха! Не смей вмешиваться в дела бессмертных!!!
Юзо: Райя, нет!!
Райя: Аййй! Я падаю! Помогите!
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Comments: 16
No no no no no no no! Not Raya's hair! >_<
Yuzo: "T-that's not very nice!"
Eshmun: "You little mortal slut!" (Directs it to Raya) I'll teach you not to interfere with business that isn't yours!" (Easier transition to next cell, and makes Eshmun sound scarier)
This, boys and girls, is why we don't climb buildings in shoes like Raya's ^_^;
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Hehe, that's right about shoes ^__^
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Cliffhanger! Hope you don't keep us all waiting too long. 
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everything's correct here, but I agree with the person up the page, "who is that?!" sounds better 
DDD: Oh noes!! Somebody save Raya!! I don't like Eshmun now!
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holy crap she's falling to her doom! D: save her Higu! lol I mean Yuzo 
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This is always a treat to read!
I like your mangas alot!
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"who is it" should probably read "who is that?"
but I think your english is improving
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I kinda like "Who is it?" actually...not sure why
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"who is it" makes me think she's behind a door and knocked on it.. you know... lol
*knock knock* "who is it?" ah, well, I guess either works.
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There really isn't anything that needs to be corrected. You can leave everything as it is. ^^
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