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Published: 2004-04-09 03:38:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 1439; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 179
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Standing here in pain and tears,Lost in memories, the hell of past years.
Emotions shifting, anger gripping,
Going numb, grip is slipping.
Left in darkness, drown in fears,
Trapped in silence, deafening to my ears.
Stumbling along, flesh is ripping,
Blood pours out, keep on tripping.
Heart is empty, soul is black,
Screams echo out, so much is lacked.
Eyes burn, bones crumble,
In sorrow die, in darkness stumble.
Head gets dizzy, knees go weak,
Lungs give out, rotting flesh starts to reek.
Laying here, choked with tears,
Heartbeat stops, mind floods with fears.
So this is death, my last day gone by,
The end of this life, the last night I'll cry.
Just wanting comfort, to feel warm skin,
Too bad it's too late to ever feel again.
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Comments: 82
SelfImposedExile [2010-01-11 23:58:09 +0000 UTC]
this is stunning.....to capture all the conflicting emotions....it`s truly beautiful.....
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SelfImposedExile [2010-01-11 23:58:06 +0000 UTC]
this is stunning.....to capture all the conflicting emotions....it`s truly beautiful.....
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Tiamas [2006-02-04 03:46:26 +0000 UTC]
You're too good for you're own good..heh..All mine!..
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BeccaGib24 [2004-11-02 22:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, this poem is amazing!! Very good descriptions! You are an amazing writer
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dEaD666 [2004-07-16 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]
good describtion of death,
their is alot of ppl with alive bodies,BUT dEaD souls,
but some how i disagre,ITS ALWAYS NOT 2 LAT!!
its late just if u belive in that!!
dEaD dRuNk hEaRT
bAdLy In LuV wItH PALESTINE
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Avry In reply to deadreflection13 [2004-07-12 04:51:40 +0000 UTC]
I'm Not Sure Anymore ..
-Avry-
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Vampiric13 [2004-06-07 03:41:55 +0000 UTC]
work in progress..uh-huh..my works in progress have 2 lines or more...
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e-boo [2004-05-24 22:18:09 +0000 UTC]
too much...good writing...g..a...h....can't..hold...on.. .much...longer....*dies*
lol i love ur work!
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Avry In reply to e-boo [2004-05-24 23:45:02 +0000 UTC]
*Laughs* Wasn't Me.. Thanks A Tun!
-Avry-
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e-boo In reply to Avry [2004-05-25 03:34:01 +0000 UTC]
lol your welcome!
i write poetry...i haven't in a while, but i wish i could write as good as you do...
how long have you been writing?
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Avry In reply to e-boo [2004-05-25 03:38:47 +0000 UTC]
Sence I Was 13.. *Smiles A Bit* Writters Block?? Suckidge.. Poetry Is Good For You..
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e-boo In reply to Avry [2004-05-25 03:42:41 +0000 UTC]
i've been writing for about 3 years...a lot of my poety got deleted...it really sucked. yeah i just haven't been too emotionally stable to write...idk why, usually when i'm fucked up i like to write, but i just haven't lately...
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e-boo In reply to Avry [2004-05-25 03:55:23 +0000 UTC]
yup, but i think i might tonight...
you've inspired me
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DarkGoth17 In reply to Avry [2004-05-18 23:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Huh? YES! I meant to say that I really liked it, it's morbidly beautiful. Dude is just my way of expressing that. My friend Vince liked them too...he thinks he sucks at poetry...wanna check out his poems??? His username is Muted-Shadow...but, yes, all of your poems are amazing, I'd fave 'em all if you'd like...there all faves of mine.
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Avry In reply to DarkGoth17 [2004-05-18 23:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Do What You Want Hun.. *Smiles* And Thanks.. I Will Look Into His Poems.. *Nods*
-Avry-
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DarkGoth17 In reply to Avry [2004-05-18 23:27:17 +0000 UTC]
WEE-HAW! I'm just joshing you. You're welcome again. Umm..just curious..is that you in the pucture on your poems???? Vince says thanks.
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Avry In reply to DarkGoth17 [2004-05-18 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Welcome Again.. Its All Good.. And No.. *Smiles* It's Amy Lee.. A Lead Singer Of A Fav Band Of Mine..
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DarkGoth17 In reply to Avry [2004-05-19 10:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Evanescence. How could I not recognize her. I like that band too.
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rottencandy [2004-05-13 20:02:41 +0000 UTC]
tis good the wording really doesnt need any work cause it flows .. i like it
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leadedfewell [2004-05-08 00:24:07 +0000 UTC]
read this one at my funeral... I like it... don't worry I won't bombard ya with anymore comments today... but I have ya marked.... I'll be back...
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Avry In reply to leadedfewell [2004-05-08 00:45:40 +0000 UTC]
Feel Free To Comment All You Wish.. *Smiles* Always Around To Nag If You Need..
-Avry-
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Avry In reply to ThisBleedingHeart [2004-05-05 03:49:23 +0000 UTC]
Thank You So Much..
-Avry-
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Unimatsuriku [2004-04-28 16:10:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow thats amazing! It's got such a great morbidity to it, it flows realy nicely and rhymes realy well. You write so creatively! ^^
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