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Description Avul’s Story

Once upon a time there was a lad named Avul. Now, Avul was a very friendly lad, and enjoyed others company, but unfortunately, he could never be around people for very long. You see, Avul had a secret. Deep within him lived a monster. A monster that enjoyed only one thing, and that was killing. Avul tried as hard as he could to keep this monster suppressed, but occasionally, when Avul got hurt or someone around him did, the monster would escape.
Because of this, Avul had to stay away from people and live alone. He didn’t mind, because he knew that as long as he was away from people, the monster could never hurt them. He lived most of his life this way, quite content with his loneliness, until the day he saw her…
She was a traveler, and the most beautiful women Avul had ever seen. At that moment, Avul suddenly felt all the years of his loneliness press down on him all at once, and knew he could not live another day without this women by his side.
The women too loved Avul, and soon they were together, living in a small cottage by the sea. But the monster was growing restless. It wanted out. Avul tried with all his might to keep it suppressed, but it was of no use. One day, while building a fire, Avul burned his arm. The shock from the pain was all it took, and the monster escaped, taking control or Avul’s body and heading instantly towards the smell of the women’s flesh. It burst into the house, and as soon as it saw the women…

It stopped.

It suddenly found itself incapable of killing the women, the only thing it couldn’t kill. The monster did not understand why this was, it couldn’t. It wouldn’t. So, frustrated by this failure, it returned to its nest within Avul.
Several times the monster escaped in the many years Avul and the women lived together, but each time it could not kill her. The monsters rage continued to grow, but it could do nothing. So it remained inside, waiting for its chance to kill again…which would soon come on the wings of white sails…
One day, during midday, it happened.
An invasion.
The armies of a foreign land landed on the shores, there numbers many, and all strong. They set strait towards the house on the shore, hoping to find extra food and provisions. What they found was even better.
Avul tried to defend the women against the foreign attacker, but it was no use. It took only one archer to take him down, an arrow pierced through his body. He lay on the ground and could only watch helplessly as the cruel men came forward to claim there prize. It was then that Avul wished to kill, to kill like the monster did, and to wipe the scum from the face of the earth. The monster was all too happy to oblige.
Set free willingly by Avul, the monster took control. The pain it felt meant nothing, for only one thought coursed through it, and that was to kill the invaders.
Seeing the dying man stand, the captain of the foreign army panicked. “Monster!” he screamed, and charged at it with his sword. The women, seeing Avul in danger, jumped in to save him, piercing herself on the man’s sword. This moment of hesitation from the captain was all the monster needed. Ripping the women from the blade and throwing her to the ground, the monster took the sword out of the startled man’s hands and decapitated him in one blow. This was the moment the monster had been waiting for. All those year of being sealed away, unable to kill, now free. The monster let loose all it fury and rage, mixed with that of Avul’s, upon the invading forces. They stood no chance against the monster, for no matter how many times their blades pierced it’s flesh, it continued to come at them.
The remaining men panicked and quickly retreated towards there ships, but the monster wasn’t done yet. As it turned to follow, it heard a small cry. Turning around, it spotted the dying women, who reached towards him, calling him to be by her side so that she may not die alone. Deep inside, the monster felt compelled to aid her, but Avul’s fury had not yet died, and it was that fury that made the monster turn it’s back on the dying women and give chase towards the retreating men.
It wasn’t until after every man was dead that Avul finally regained control of his body. Returning to the house by shore, he found the women, dead. She had died alone, without him there to comfort her. Realizing this, Avul went into madness. He had left her. He had let her die alone. It was his fault.
It was at that moment that Avul let go. He let go of everything, and let the monster out one last time. He didn’t care what it did, or who it hurt, it didn’t matter anymore. And so, Avul sealed himself away…

Until one day, he woke up…


EDIT: Sorry for the cliffhanger thing there. You see, when he woke up, he was already dead and now a Fallen.
Anyway, this is the second half of Fallen Avul.

For 's OCT

EDIT 2: Colors
Eyes- blueish green
Hair- light brown
Skin- Normal, no tan, but not pale either
Shirt- Grey
Pants- A shade of greyish blue
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Comments: 33

lucidflux [2010-01-14 22:47:15 +0000 UTC]

HA I'M EVEN LATER THAN CHU AT ACTUALLY READING THIS.

Not sure if this is a good thing, but still. xD

That's a really well thought-out backtory, Avul....and very sad. I love the progression of his downfall, and how empathetic as a character he is. Really helps me understand the Fallen as well.

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Avul In reply to lucidflux [2010-01-15 16:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, THAT old thing? Oh man, I need to hurry up and make him a new Ref sheet, cause that one has so many flaws in it, it's not funny.......

(The back story is still the same.............although, I'm still at a lost of WHAT time period he was born in exactly...)

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lucidflux In reply to Avul [2010-01-15 21:07:32 +0000 UTC]

I would advance it to the 8th century (700s) to coincide with the Viking invasion of England, if that's what you were referring to. UNLESS it's a parallel universe in which case whatevs. xD

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Avul In reply to lucidflux [2010-01-15 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]

It's a MY universe, that's based off of OUR universe, and I have NO idea what's going on in it. XD

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lucidflux In reply to Avul [2010-01-15 22:47:21 +0000 UTC]

xDD THIS MAY BE A GOOD THING.

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Avul In reply to lucidflux [2010-01-16 14:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh heh, back to the History books!!!

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lucidflux In reply to Avul [2010-01-16 18:46:59 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUU.

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Pandachu [2009-06-26 07:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Finally got around to reading Avul's story...that's really sad, dude. ;^;

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Avul In reply to Pandachu [2009-06-26 07:22:02 +0000 UTC]

You just now got around to it?

Oh well, I don't blame you. It's sort of long anyway. Though it is sad. I'm glad I finally found a use for his character.

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Pandachu In reply to Avul [2009-06-26 07:41:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. xD I was actually browsing your gallery and then realized that I hadn't actually read the authro's comment for him. xD

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Avul In reply to Pandachu [2009-06-26 07:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh well, at least you read it.

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Pandachu In reply to Avul [2009-06-26 08:32:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I did. xD

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Avul In reply to Pandachu [2009-06-26 08:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Just don't go emo or anything, otherwise I'll feel it's my fault. XD

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Pandachu In reply to Avul [2009-06-26 09:26:19 +0000 UTC]

What? xD Oh, no, I won't, don't worry.

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WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 00:47:57 +0000 UTC]

so Avul is different from other Fallens?

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Avul In reply to WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 00:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, for one, he knows how to change his form from it's original state. Two, he doesn't really do his job...Fallen Avul does, but Avul doesn't. Three, he hasn't faded away yet. A normal Fallen only last maybe a hundred, two hundred years.

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Avul [2009-06-13 00:55:13 +0000 UTC]

so his human side still has a bit of control?

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Avul In reply to WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 01:04:21 +0000 UTC]

He doesn't have a human side, only "more" human.

Avul is also Fallen. I just call Fallen Avul by that name because he's more Fallen. I'll give him a real name later during the tornament, most likely in the Intro pages or Round one. Unfortunately, I can't revel it just yet...

Quick Note: Fallen Avul is one entity, two personalities. It's the same soul. As much as Avul has tried in the past, he can not separate Fallen Avul from himself.

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Avul [2009-06-13 01:06:58 +0000 UTC]

OHHHHHH so he like turned into a fallen, but his some of his human qualities remained?

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Avul In reply to WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 01:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Split personality disorder, in ultimate form.

Also, he has Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, so when he has a sudden shock, like great pain or seeing someone he cares about get hurt, he goes into shock and Fallen Avul takes over. Get it?

Science can explain just about anything...I think...

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Avul [2009-06-13 01:24:35 +0000 UTC]

ohhhhhh i see! ok i think i get it!

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Avul In reply to WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 01:42:36 +0000 UTC]

*Big Exhale* Good. I think I'm gonna have to type something up in case other people don't get it all the way too.

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WEareANGELsong In reply to Avul [2009-06-13 01:43:21 +0000 UTC]

hahaha nah im just interested

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Avul In reply to WEareANGELsong [2009-06-13 01:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty >w<

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Dinadan-Ermorfea [2009-05-31 08:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Good work on the background story

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Avul In reply to Dinadan-Ermorfea [2009-05-31 15:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Dinadan-Ermorfea In reply to Avul [2009-05-31 20:32:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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sparklepire [2009-05-31 06:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Looks like you've really thought out a thorough storyline. Nice job.

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Avul In reply to sparklepire [2009-05-31 06:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. This is one of the many sad stories that have been going on in my head for a while. I believe this gives me a distinct advantage against my opponents in the OCT, because I actually know and love my character.

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UnsureHero In reply to Avul [2009-05-31 19:51:55 +0000 UTC]

I guess I have an advantage too? R and Nathan have been with me for a while now. I've been giving lots of thought to them, and I love them a lot. But, since where they actually live is distinctly different from here, I had to change them.

Like I had to trade in R's handgun for a Scythe.

And instead of Soot, the mafia mentor, we have Soot, the creator of the Scythe Demise.

And I took away most of R's magic. She retains a little, but it's mostly Perception. The kind of stuff that would let her stay maybe a centimeter out of range of an enemy attack.

So I have an advantage over some of them, but since Avul was created for this setting, you have an advantage over me.

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Avul In reply to UnsureHero [2009-05-31 20:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Actually, Fallen Avul has been in my head for a Looooooong time. He's the evil voice that whispers to me every day. I actually had to downgrade him a little bit, but only his strength and magic stuff, other than that, he's completely the same.

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sparklepire In reply to Avul [2009-05-31 06:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I think everyone has attachment to their characters... but having extensively developed a character's background/personality definitely helps keep them consistent and solid.

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Avul In reply to sparklepire [2009-05-31 06:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess so.

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