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Published: 2015-05-08 16:29:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 668; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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this is long overdue...

Here's another sketch for one of his awesome poems:



My dearest whom I have watched from afar
In this note you've found now held in your hand
You're more wonderful than they say you are
Your beauty abounds more than grains of sand

Let never the words of those who envy
Your talents God gave you make you feel small
I would love it if you would befriend me
For you are the most beautiful of all

In art class I've watched your graceful hand paint
A still life portrait of a mountain scape
Your art deserves not one single complaint
It's complimented by your own fine shape

In history your answers are precise
To the facts you've studied so hard to know
You're so smart and yet you're so humbly nice
As your shy replies to admirers show

In cooking you make meals with heartfelt skill
And love for others for whom your food's wrought
They're so delicious because with good will
You made them with a selfless, caring thought

In sewing you made the warmest of scarfs
And one you gave me as a Christmas gift
Was filled with your feelings of great remarks
It felt like love and may you God uplift

During summer at the beach other guys
I saw trying to ask you on a date
Were turned away by you to my surprise
Will you please be mine before it's too late?

I want to be there for you when your heart
Feels broken, because I'll have it mended
Caring for you, I'll know the place to start
I'll hold you tight and have your heart tended

I know not how you might perceive me back
Do you see me as a friend? If not what?
My feelings towards you shall not ever lack
I am privileged you gave me a thought

All I can say is the first day of class
When I first saw your smile brighter than day
My time with you I'd hope would always last
Forever those memories shall remain

I don't want to shock you, but will you please
Be my girlfriend who'll love me forever?
I'd find you if we were parted by seas
In saving you, till death I'll endeavor

Thus ends this note with my words just for you
From my heart otherwise sealed from all sights
I would love to have a love life anew
My first one with you all days and nights

I believe you are my prayer's answer
From the Father who made both you and I
In this note I wrote He gave me the nerveΒ 
To show my feelings for you that won't die

Mason Allen Buskirk
21 March 2014
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Comments: 12

SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-08 16:35:32 +0000 UTC]

It's here already! Amazing!

This captures the very essence of what I hope to experience with my girl as well...

Would you mind posting the text of my poem with this post as well, please?

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-08 16:37:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

Great to know (I also tried to make the man's outfit look like something you would wear)

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SteamRailwayCompany In reply to Aw0 [2015-05-08 16:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

Now that is so very thoughtful.

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-08 16:45:06 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure.

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SteamRailwayCompany In reply to Aw0 [2015-05-08 19:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I also adore how you put that teary, almost crying, joyful look in his eye.

I know this is how I'll look when the moment described in this picture comes.

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-08 19:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the emotion bit was really important to me in this. Β 

I had a feeling you'd say something like that. XD I'll probably be the same way.

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SteamRailwayCompany In reply to Aw0 [2015-05-08 20:16:35 +0000 UTC]

In the first sketch I love how you had the man facing God's creation for him, the awesomeΒ wind blowing through his hair, and we don't actually see his face. That actually gives even more of an impression, to my mind, that his pupils are nearly invisible and his mouth is dropped open.

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-08 21:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Haha, it was a blast doing that one!

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SteamRailwayCompany In reply to Aw0 [2015-05-09 01:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Are your order books full per chance? Soon, I'm going to want to place many commissions from you, my friend. This makes me crave for more.Β 

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-09 02:29:28 +0000 UTC]

No, I don't have any commissions at the moment Thanks for your support yet again.Β 

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SteamRailwayCompany In reply to Aw0 [2015-05-24 00:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Um, could you please copy and paste the poem to go in the description with the post, please?Β 

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Aw0 In reply to SteamRailwayCompany [2015-05-24 16:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Done

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