HOME | DD

awesomesauce — I Hope You're Still Alive
Published: 2004-05-24 18:13:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 571; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 162
Redirect to original
Description "i hope youre still alive"

she's so lovely
yet she's hurting
for she knows this world
that it's cold and ugly, yet shes learning
to take her problems
forget they exist
go and hide in her scars and wounds
that she creates to take away the pain

but she knows that

if only she knew
     others would hurt for her
if only she knew
     two wounds make two scars
if only she would just think
of that person who loves her
     he wishes he could take her tears
          and bottle them
if only he could steal her pain
     and take away the sickness and hurt
           even make them his own

if only he could be enough
     to be enough
          for her to know

it doesnt have to be this way...

~the end~
Related content
Comments: 33

silversilence [2004-06-10 19:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful writing! I love it!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

purpleglitter87 [2004-06-08 05:39:44 +0000 UTC]

This is great

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to purpleglitter87 [2004-06-08 16:41:22 +0000 UTC]

im glad you think so

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

lovelorn [2004-05-28 04:39:55 +0000 UTC]

So who was this about?...~Srfgurl5 ?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-05-28 17:26:59 +0000 UTC]

nope

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

lovelorn In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-29 05:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Who...?

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Srfgurl5 [2004-05-26 16:21:26 +0000 UTC]

*sob*........

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

pwx [2004-05-26 12:19:03 +0000 UTC]

beautiful..sick. but beautiful

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to pwx [2004-05-26 15:31:34 +0000 UTC]

sick??? beautiful???

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Cheesewoman [2004-05-25 20:12:38 +0000 UTC]

I love everything you do! You are great!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-05-25 21:04:19 +0000 UTC]

awwww....

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

EmoHeartBleeds [2004-05-25 19:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Yet again, wonderful work by Adam!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

lipsxeyesxback [2004-05-25 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow...adam...I really love this, its so beautiful....*holds tummy in pain*...who is it for? A very lovely lady I'm guessing? girlfriend? Anyway, its wonderfuly awesome! heh....

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to lipsxeyesxback [2004-05-25 16:05:28 +0000 UTC]

thnx syd

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

aperfectfailure [2004-05-24 22:14:59 +0000 UTC]

wow, this one really hits home... i love the emotion behind it... its just beautiful...

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to aperfectfailure [2004-05-24 23:11:32 +0000 UTC]

:dancing:

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

brandi-dawn-777 [2004-05-24 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2004-05-24 22:06:15 +0000 UTC]

dont frown.. i havent heard from u in a while glad to see you're alive

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

brandi-dawn-777 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-25 04:56:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah... now i just have to ask myself if that is a good or bad thing

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2004-05-25 16:06:02 +0000 UTC]

tis a wonderful thing. i missed your comments and work

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

brandi-dawn-777 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-25 19:02:02 +0000 UTC]

thnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Elerrina [2004-05-24 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]

*cries* .. thats beautiful ... full of feeling. nice imagery too ... i mean in the creative technique sense ....

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to Elerrina [2004-05-24 22:05:18 +0000 UTC]

awww. dont cry.... thanks for the lovely comment

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Elerrina In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-25 16:24:05 +0000 UTC]

*dries eyeses* ... its really great *sniffles*

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to Elerrina [2004-05-25 16:33:39 +0000 UTC]

i hope it didnt really make u cry, its not that bad. ...lol thnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

twilytt [2004-05-24 18:20:57 +0000 UTC]

WOW *stunned* this is really Poignant. i can so feel for the subject and the way you've conveyed not only her pain but also his is truly beautiful in its own way. *bows to o'mighty poet*

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to twilytt [2004-05-24 22:04:18 +0000 UTC]

aww ur so nice. thnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

downdrowning [2004-05-24 18:19:04 +0000 UTC]

///very nice

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to downdrowning [2004-05-24 22:03:03 +0000 UTC]

///thnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

rosescent [2004-05-24 18:16:10 +0000 UTC]

wow that's beautiful...wow just wow

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to rosescent [2004-05-24 22:02:48 +0000 UTC]

really...?
thnx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

z33k [2004-05-24 18:15:04 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

awesomesauce In reply to z33k [2004-05-24 22:02:07 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0