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Published: 2004-05-24 18:13:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 571; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 162
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"i hope youre still alive"she's so lovely
yet she's hurting
for she knows this world
that it's cold and ugly, yet shes learning
to take her problems
forget they exist
go and hide in her scars and wounds
that she creates to take away the pain
but she knows that
if only she knew
others would hurt for her
if only she knew
two wounds make two scars
if only she would just think
of that person who loves her
he wishes he could take her tears
and bottle them
if only he could steal her pain
and take away the sickness and hurt
even make them his own
if only he could be enough
to be enough
for her to know
it doesnt have to be this way...
~the end~
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Comments: 33
awesomesauce In reply to purpleglitter87 [2004-06-08 16:41:22 +0000 UTC]
im glad you think so
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lipsxeyesxback [2004-05-25 14:09:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow...adam...I really love this, its so beautiful....*holds tummy in pain*...who is it for? A very lovely lady I'm guessing? girlfriend? Anyway, its wonderfuly awesome! heh....
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aperfectfailure [2004-05-24 22:14:59 +0000 UTC]
wow, this one really hits home... i love the emotion behind it... its just beautiful...
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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2004-05-24 22:06:15 +0000 UTC]
dont frown.. i havent heard from u in a while glad to see you're alive
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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-25 04:56:41 +0000 UTC]
yeah... now i just have to ask myself if that is a good or bad thing
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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2004-05-25 16:06:02 +0000 UTC]
tis a wonderful thing. i missed your comments and work
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Elerrina [2004-05-24 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]
*cries* .. thats beautiful ... full of feeling. nice imagery too ... i mean in the creative technique sense ....
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awesomesauce In reply to Elerrina [2004-05-24 22:05:18 +0000 UTC]
awww. dont cry.... thanks for the lovely comment
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Elerrina In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-25 16:24:05 +0000 UTC]
*dries eyeses* ... its really great *sniffles*
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awesomesauce In reply to Elerrina [2004-05-25 16:33:39 +0000 UTC]
i hope it didnt really make u cry, its not that bad. ...lol thnx
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twilytt [2004-05-24 18:20:57 +0000 UTC]
WOW *stunned* this is really Poignant. i can so feel for the subject and the way you've conveyed not only her pain but also his is truly beautiful in its own way. *bows to o'mighty poet*
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