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Published: 2004-02-09 16:48:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 36
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please dont look me in the eyei think i just might find
what ive been looking for
in this cold, dark world
just a hint of your smile
makes the sun burn out
and the sky melt away
and my heart break in two
but you come and mend me
with those sweet, sweet lips
and i know that ill be allright
i cant feel anything at all
from the winter's snow
this cold dark world has created
but this tender warmth
burns from you heart to mine
now my soul defrosts
and in your eyes i find
what ive been looking for
this coldness runs deep
and i cant help but feel numb
it runs deep to my soul
where it meets...
...you
... and im all right
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Comments: 17
awesomesauce In reply to celesteeve [2004-02-10 05:52:51 +0000 UTC]
hhehe im glad you liked it
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celesteeve In reply to awesomesauce [2004-02-10 22:45:52 +0000 UTC]
very good.wish i could b numb.
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kalix [2004-02-09 17:06:46 +0000 UTC]
wow..er...well i dont know how to do those exclamation thingys but er...i guess i'll give the best comment i'm capable of...your poem is v thought-provoking and inspiring...
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awesomesauce In reply to kalix [2004-02-09 17:22:13 +0000 UTC]
and those are good things... rite?
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lovelorn In reply to kalix [2004-02-10 16:27:11 +0000 UTC]
He means hes unsure of hisself and he doubts himself but he does appritiate the comments, dont mind his gloomyness its temporary
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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-02-10 16:52:40 +0000 UTC]
thanks beb couldnt have sed it better myself...
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awesomesauce In reply to ameliarose [2004-02-09 17:22:38 +0000 UTC]
wow!... liked it that much eh?
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