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awesomesauce — am i sorry?
Published: 2004-03-31 20:30:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 35
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Description am i sorry i make you cry
am i sorry i feel i have to lie
i try to and just wish things would be made better
i wish id be happy, and live in these letters
i wish i could be what you want me to be im not, i wish we all could see
why i do the things i do
why i feel like the color blue
how much it hurts me to see you cry
how much it kills me with every lie
all i can think is 'i wish i was loved'
all i care about is being cared about because
nothing else matters in my eyes
nothingg else fills these tears that i cry
when i think between these sobbs
'why am i here?'
'what matters most'
'what is truth?'
'am i an animal or a ghost?'
if only you could be here while i pain
if only i could reassure you nad not die in vain
and tell you i love you
even though it might not show
all i care about is love
more than anyone could know...
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Comments: 20

lovelorn [2004-05-07 17:55:07 +0000 UTC]

Now I know what this meant.

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-05-07 19:42:19 +0000 UTC]

wtf?!?! it wasnt to you... believe me, it wasnt

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lovelorn [2004-04-20 15:26:50 +0000 UTC]

i love you

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DementedDoll [2004-04-01 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]

i love you ^^ lol

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awesomesauce In reply to DementedDoll [2004-04-01 22:45:17 +0000 UTC]

...

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DementedDoll In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-01 22:49:02 +0000 UTC]

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Cheesewoman [2004-04-01 20:40:36 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem!!


and I love you!

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awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-04-01 22:46:06 +0000 UTC]

awww.. ur sweet

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batty666 [2004-03-31 23:54:36 +0000 UTC]

very nicely done man...but..
"how much it kills me ewith every lie"
"'am i an animal or a ghose?'"
ewith = with?
ghose = ghost?

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awesomesauce In reply to batty666 [2004-03-31 23:56:31 +0000 UTC]

hahaha thnx beb

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batty666 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-03-31 23:57:41 +0000 UTC]

no problem man!

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awesomesauce In reply to batty666 [2004-03-31 23:59:22 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the fav!

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batty666 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-01 00:00:39 +0000 UTC]

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Srfgurl5 [2004-03-31 21:50:32 +0000 UTC]

BRAVO.....I CARE! and I relate 100% 2 this poem

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-03-31 23:58:57 +0000 UTC]

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necromancer901 [2004-03-31 20:36:49 +0000 UTC]

cool

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awesomesauce In reply to necromancer901 [2004-03-31 21:01:43 +0000 UTC]

...?

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necromancer901 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-01 11:27:39 +0000 UTC]

good poem

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awesomesauce In reply to necromancer901 [2004-04-01 16:20:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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necromancer901 In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-02 11:35:01 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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