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can it be entropy...continuing this waltz?
of puppets with gold, silken string
thinking htat they're real, little boys and girls
yet their angel faery does not await them
their angel is dead
shes not there to take away those sparkling chords
she can't relieve their inhibitions
they are inhabitants of those silken gold bars
till their fate brings them
each to their own deceased fantasy
she cant make their dreams reality
and yet they wait
for in their minds eye
all things are possible
and i will scream
adding to the silence
and i will live
hastening my death
and i will learn
to love this life of loud performance
and the audience just sat there
...staring...
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Comments: 21
lovelorn [2004-06-05 04:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Wha wha wha, more lame depressing goth poems. Wyatt was right.
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 04:41:59 +0000 UTC]
lame? how can u say that is lame lovelorn? I love most of your works and they are really good like Adams and I dont call them "lame" if lame meaning beautiful then u r 100% correct
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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-06-12 04:50:16 +0000 UTC]
1 you double posted
2 I admit that my works are lame and depressing goth poems, wyatt was right
3 you dont know why i put that or the emotion behind it, you have adam, you seem to know nothing about when him and i were "together" you dont know what i felt for him you dont know how how hurt i was when he tells me to stop playing childish games, to face realty that it could never work, child, you are 16, you dont know life yet or the real world yet, my pain is my pain and when i make a comment to adam he knows why i made it
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 04:56:56 +0000 UTC]
p.s. sorry I dont understand...I just said something without thinking...its non of my buisness sorry u rock!
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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-06-12 05:02:57 +0000 UTC]
ok... confused
*fixes previous typo, i meant cruel, not creul*
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 04:56:10 +0000 UTC]
darling Adam and I arnt 2gether...and I dont want 2 know life
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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-06-12 05:01:39 +0000 UTC]
you telling him that you love him on comments and you two always fawning over eachother gives the impression that you are together, and its good that you dont want to know life, it is creul
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 05:04:44 +0000 UTC]
y does it comment it twice?..I am cursed :dies:
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 05:11:34 +0000 UTC]
heheh ok I shall click once...have a nice night bye
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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-06-12 05:08:00 +0000 UTC]
it double posts because you clicked twice
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 05:04:16 +0000 UTC]
ya I have gotten a good taste of life...try 2 end it now and again...but I find hope in simple things...GOD LOVES ME *sob* hahaha and He loves u 2...hahah maybe we shouldnt comment on Adam's site anymore cause he will yell @ both of us hahah but if u wanna chat note me or something...I like your insite on life...very interesting points of view...bravo!
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 05:04:15 +0000 UTC]
ya I have gotten a good taste of life...try 2 end it now and again...but I find hope in simple things...GOD LOVES ME *sob* hahaha and He loves u 2...hahah maybe we shouldnt comment on Adam's site anymore cause he will yell @ both of us hahah but if u wanna chat note me or something...I like your insite on life...very interesting points of view...bravo!
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lovelorn In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-06-12 05:06:18 +0000 UTC]
I am Wiccan, I know nothing of your false God.
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Srfgurl5 In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-12 04:40:56 +0000 UTC]
lame? how can u say that is lame lovelorn? I love most of your works and they are really good like Adams and I dont call them "lame" if lame meaning beautiful then u r 100% correct
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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-06-05 05:24:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks, ive always appreciated ur comments. this is a new variety i happen to be fond of your art aswell
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lipsxeyesxback [2004-06-03 21:07:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow...adam this is so beautiful! You paint such a vivid picture, that all flows perfectly together. Your so wonderful
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awesomesauce In reply to lipsxeyesxback [2004-06-03 21:23:14 +0000 UTC]
YAY!! she likes it, she really likes it!
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lipsxeyesxback In reply to awesomesauce [2004-06-04 02:41:13 +0000 UTC]
Heh...yes I REALLY do!
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