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awesomesauce — as i stare upon thin image
Published: 2004-12-23 21:48:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 184; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description tonight my heart
lies in this bed
almost as comforting
as the way you held my gaze
and as i look back
on the night of your reality
i can only imagine
on these possibilities i dream

your stare here lingers
like the smell of your touch
my robe now trophies
my once present angel
this night, my lady,
is no brighter than our moment
yet the stars they hum
a less brilliant song

and as i gaze
upon thin image
the depth percieved
hasnt a sound
but still i hear you
laugh and giggle
and this photograph
it comes alive

my stare does nothing but hasten my nerve
more beautiful than mortal perception
your wonderfully perfect, if i may say so myself
the beggar gives you his coin
                                               just to see you
smile...
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Comments: 13

Srfgurl5 [2009-08-24 06:14:20 +0000 UTC]

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Srfgurl5 [2006-11-06 22:21:43 +0000 UTC]

maaarrrrryyyyy meeee k?

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brandi-dawn-777 [2004-12-28 18:25:07 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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wondrwomn [2004-12-25 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]

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lipsxeyesxback [2004-12-24 04:57:31 +0000 UTC]

*Smiles* Wow...this is so beautiful adam. I loved the imagery so much! Your just TOO amazing to be real!

But I'm still wondering.....who is this about?? I would love to know hehe..

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perfectcontradiction [2004-12-24 01:12:00 +0000 UTC]

i enjoyed the imagery, but must you use italics, bold, AND underline in the last stanza??? i know you added it for emphasis... but the mellifluous nature of the piece becomes choppy when you disguise the meaning behind twelve layers of font changes. you're better than that.

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awesomesauce In reply to perfectcontradiction [2004-12-24 02:03:12 +0000 UTC]

i wanted an excessive moment.. CANT A GUY DO SOMETHING FOR HIMSELF FOR A CHANGE!!?! you people and your demands..

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perfectcontradiction In reply to awesomesauce [2004-12-24 02:31:57 +0000 UTC]

haha.... excessive, certainly.
and doing something for yourself?
thats what hands are for.
:gasp:
raunchy.

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awesomesauce In reply to perfectcontradiction [2004-12-24 06:49:51 +0000 UTC]

oh my...
wee youve been buisy
:har:
i mean..

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aperfectfailure [2004-12-23 21:52:26 +0000 UTC]

wow...t his is such a beautiful peom... AGAIN
i love the last verse
my stare does nothing but hasten my nerve
more beautiful than mortal perception
your wonderfully perfect, if i may say so myself
the beggar gives you his coin
                                                just to see you smile...
so beautiful
so beautiful

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awesomesauce In reply to aperfectfailure [2004-12-23 21:57:10 +0000 UTC]

thnx

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HeatherBomb [2004-12-23 21:49:18 +0000 UTC]

yet the stars they hum. beautiful.

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awesomesauce In reply to HeatherBomb [2004-12-23 21:51:11 +0000 UTC]

thanx!

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