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awesomesauce — closing wound per nylon thread
Published: 2004-04-22 18:18:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 26
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Description weaving to and fro
in this epidermis
trying to cover
these wounds at surface
knowing full well
and on purpose
that this thread is only temporary

my skin ceases
to heal this scar
and shows me
with that mark by far
that this is exactly
what you are
in this life of harsh encounter

reading poems
of sweet, sweet bliss
of of waking up
by loves true kiss
or how ones life
you could miss
if you are meloncholy and dry

these i write
to portray
about these things
night and day
in order so that
i may stay
out of pergatory
    and in between
        life and death...
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Comments: 27

devur [2004-05-17 13:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Tell me you're going to look to get some of your work published (if it isn't already, of course). You're good, and deserve to be recognized proper.

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awesomesauce In reply to devur [2004-05-17 14:23:51 +0000 UTC]

ha. no im just sum kid who rites his thoughts. i dont deserve publication. you are really too kind.

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devur In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-17 15:32:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I'm too kind...you have talent.

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awesomesauce In reply to devur [2004-05-17 17:05:47 +0000 UTC]

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lucidpoetress [2004-05-10 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Nicely written.

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awesomesauce In reply to lucidpoetress [2004-05-10 23:16:09 +0000 UTC]

thnx

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lovelorn [2004-04-23 12:08:26 +0000 UTC]

I love you

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-24 02:09:00 +0000 UTC]

omg.. cmon... this is rediculous..

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lovelorn In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-26 12:05:07 +0000 UTC]

No its not

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-26 16:27:35 +0000 UTC]

wtf.. seriously dont put this on my page. u can fight all u want, but on each others pages...

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-26 13:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Yea, actually it is.

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lovelorn In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-26 15:19:11 +0000 UTC]

nope

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-26 16:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I suppose i'm just too mature for this.
Sorry I said anything Adam. :/

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-23 13:16:08 +0000 UTC]

No! You can't love him! I love him!

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lovelorn In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-23 15:16:03 +0000 UTC]

You love him all you want but whom does he love in return... c'mon, guess. Me.

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-23 16:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Hm.. Is that a challenge?

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lovelorn In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-26 12:04:19 +0000 UTC]

If you don't believe me, ask him yourself. We had a loverly little conversation last weekend, if you want I can give you his phone number.

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to lovelorn [2004-04-26 13:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Well, actually .. i just kidding. But since people lost all sense of humor..
Thats ok! I believe you. :/

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EmoHeartBleeds In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-23 16:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully not because I know i'll lose. > .<

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Cheesewoman [2004-04-23 03:10:31 +0000 UTC]

your poems are way better than mine! oh well, you have talent! oh by the way check out some of my poems...maybe you can give me some advice, and yah...

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awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-04-24 02:11:16 +0000 UTC]

hehe.. will do

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Cheesewoman In reply to awesomesauce [2004-04-25 18:23:10 +0000 UTC]

w00t!

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awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-04-26 16:27:57 +0000 UTC]

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EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-22 19:41:58 +0000 UTC]

Great work, yet again.

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awesomesauce In reply to EmoHeartBleeds [2004-04-22 20:59:34 +0000 UTC]

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nolight [2004-04-22 18:45:58 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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awesomesauce In reply to nolight [2004-04-22 18:48:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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