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awesomesauce — connect the dots
Published: 2004-12-23 21:37:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description now this map upon your face
tells me points of no return
connect the dots on which i failed
see the kisses to whom it may concern

beginning where all centers fall
the focus to where my heart is found
continuing to each corner's smirk
and in return my eyes search all around

remember your most coveted flaw
a flaw interpreted by desire
your eyes lack nothing beautiful only by
my lack of stare into their raging fire

and as your lips continue to becon
my mouth towards your blessed face
the thought into my mind does enter
that yours and mine were meant to embrace
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Comments: 4

ViolaBell [2005-01-01 00:32:09 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet

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lipsxeyesxback [2004-12-24 04:51:47 +0000 UTC]

This is so wonderful. So full of different emotions. Mmm....its kinda depressing. (in a good way though heh) Are you okay sweety? I really hope all is well. I miss you so very much.

Whose face were you looking at? Just wondering....hehe

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Srfgurl5 In reply to lipsxeyesxback [2006-09-28 23:34:45 +0000 UTC]

...hehe

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aperfectfailure [2004-12-23 21:41:18 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is so good!!
i love it
its such a cute love kinda poem...a hopeful one..
i love it
wow

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