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awesomesauce — dream in a butterfly net
Published: 2003-11-25 09:02:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 104; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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Description slowly dancing around tonight...
we stay here..
lying next to ourselves...
lieing to ourselves...

we try to catch these dreams...
yet the fade and slipp away...
into our thoughts...

in our prison...
this mind...
we fall into deep
      deep slumber...

swirling and spinning...

                     into...

bliss and all its vengeful counterparts...

only to awaken...

desiring more...
    more of this...
      fantasy...
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awesomesauce - arm+finger - foot+toe
Comments: 11

Palemoon-Whiteroze [2004-02-23 04:32:04 +0000 UTC]

dgmmyukuyj, hdgnm dye7yk,m fjku,j,
ur poem is greats but your not cool enough for real words
yfulfyfy.?
lovingly yours
anthony

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awesomesauce In reply to Palemoon-Whiteroze [2004-02-23 22:13:43 +0000 UTC]

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brandi-dawn-777 [2003-12-06 03:37:52 +0000 UTC]

wow.... it's beautiful

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-12-06 05:56:32 +0000 UTC]

thnks

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dgabriele [2003-11-29 21:07:04 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful...

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awesomesauce In reply to dgabriele [2003-11-30 09:21:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks hon,..

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lovelorn [2003-11-26 19:28:14 +0000 UTC]

it wont be a fantasy forever..., come summer itll be a reality

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dewintheair [2003-11-25 17:14:41 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful. I love the way you structure your poems, refreshingly different.

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awesomesauce In reply to dewintheair [2003-11-26 04:13:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks ...

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greywillow [2003-11-25 12:20:40 +0000 UTC]

yay fantasy

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awesomesauce In reply to greywillow [2003-11-26 04:15:16 +0000 UTC]

yay greywillow!!

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