toymachine11 [2004-03-20 04:37:18 +0000 UTC]

so sweet..yet so sad its beautifully written. nice job!

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chiefeagle02 [2004-03-15 17:23:53 +0000 UTC]

I think its nice.

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MikeLovesEveYah [2004-02-28 13:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Thats so sweet...i wish i could write like that!

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Palemoon-Whiteroze [2004-02-23 04:25:28 +0000 UTC]

awesome sauce you know wut this poem reminds me of? i reminds me of u and liana, but ur "short" self can not have her. but it was a pretty good poem oh yea... mascara running now.

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brandi-dawn-777 [2004-01-11 01:49:18 +0000 UTC]

very sweet!

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DreamWarriorMizu [2003-12-22 09:09:10 +0000 UTC]

It's very good, awesome. It's sad, but good. I had someone a long time ago that felt the same way about me as I did about him. Well, after a few rows between his grandma and my parents, he and his grandma moved away... He called me a couple of times after that, the last time telling me he was going blind, and that the next time, if we were to ever meet again, he probably wouldn't be able to see me...

Sorry about that. It's a very lovely poem. I gotta add it as a fave.

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lovelorn [2003-12-21 04:48:15 +0000 UTC]

so we wait
and in our waiting our love grows strong
so much that it may overcome us
i have been

the days they will come and go
but i know
you wont

i love you

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dgabriele [2003-12-19 21:45:01 +0000 UTC]

I totally agree with ~theeaseofrain mascara and tears just don't mix...

beautiful poem

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theeaseofrain [2003-12-18 20:38:54 +0000 UTC]

note to self:
-awesomesauce-s poetry should be saved for when i'm not about to go to work with mascara on.

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eccobella [2003-12-17 23:37:12 +0000 UTC]

Sad. I love it. Thank you for sharing your feelings and emotions. Critic my work please. I'd really appreciate it . You seem like the type of person who has a good head on his shoulders.

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vespa-pain [2003-12-17 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]

a little sappy but i love how you make the point of distance in a relationship...i really love your wording and short lined writing...overall its really good...i can relate to it

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