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Published: 2004-05-17 15:14:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 112; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 24
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Description tell me something
anything if you can
give me your best shot
point blank
stark naked
waiting to hear
the blast from
the cannon you call your mouth
as i see your words
fly through the clouds
and burn down the sky
and catch in my palms
warming them with their wounds
holding my hands
and i know now
why each night i seem
to let it come back

karosine tears
gasoline appears
and yet you keep taunting me
throwing your unlit matches
into my heart-shaped barrel
of awaited combustion
internal eruption
the cessation of desire
knowing no end

uncertain of these endless hopes
of nightmares coming true
at the scene of the crime
a dream come true.
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Comments: 14

Cheesewoman [2004-05-25 20:24:30 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!

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awesomesauce In reply to Cheesewoman [2004-05-25 21:00:56 +0000 UTC]

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Srfgurl5 [2004-05-17 21:51:26 +0000 UTC]

karosine tears
gasoline appears
and yet you keep taunting me
throwing your unlit matches
into my heart-shaped barrel
of awaited combustion
internal eruption
the cessation of desire
knowing no end


I like this best

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-05-18 16:57:39 +0000 UTC]

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Srfgurl5 [2004-05-17 21:50:48 +0000 UTC]

WOW! thats awesome......I like the pictures it gave me........

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-05-18 16:58:03 +0000 UTC]

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longhairhippie [2004-05-17 17:15:34 +0000 UTC]

second stanza is phenomenal.

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pax et bonum

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awesomesauce In reply to longhairhippie [2004-05-17 18:08:38 +0000 UTC]

thnx man. PHENOMINALITICALNESSATIONSSSSSESEseses.. .

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longhairhippie In reply to awesomesauce [2004-05-18 01:39:35 +0000 UTC]

ooooooooooooooookay.

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awesomesauce In reply to longhairhippie [2004-05-18 17:07:49 +0000 UTC]

..lol

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devur [2004-05-17 15:35:16 +0000 UTC]

As ~lovelorn said, beautiful. And you don't think you have talent?

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awesomesauce In reply to devur [2004-05-17 17:05:05 +0000 UTC]

not so much as to deserve recognition or publication .

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lovelorn [2004-05-17 15:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2004-05-17 17:07:27 +0000 UTC]

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