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awesomesauce — its time
Published: 2003-10-11 11:59:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 16
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faces whirling , spinning , twirling , around
pictures of this aweful tearing sound
    fading
taking , making , breaking , waking me up...

to the sight of the earth...
and all its endless birth...
of all these...

faces whirling , spinning , twirling , around
pictures of this aweful tearing sound
    fading
taking , making , breaking , waking me up...

to the sight of the earth...
and all its endless birth...
of all of this...

and now its time to blow the candles out (its time)...

and these toombstones fall as they bleed tothe ground
and the sound of her voice fills the whole world with joy

and all the broken bottles
they twist and turn

but you...
   you return....
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Comments: 8

celesteeve [2004-01-31 04:25:38 +0000 UTC]

it is yet another wonderful poem.the thing about perfection is what we lack was very well true.if i have learned 1 thing it would b i am perfectly imperfect.

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lovelorn [2003-10-12 02:10:45 +0000 UTC]

did u write these 2 on here today about your girlfriend?
soooooooooooooo cutefullness

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2003-10-13 00:00:13 +0000 UTC]

ye si wrote them and no not about my gorlfriend... seeing as how she doesnt exist... but yes i did write it... yes...

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brandi-dawn-777 [2003-10-11 12:17:19 +0000 UTC]

wow i love this.... the way you wrote it is just perfect

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-10-11 12:23:47 +0000 UTC]

perfection is that which we lack... and that which we see is impurity... yet somethings remain undefiled and portray perfection as best as physically possible...

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to awesomesauce [2003-10-12 00:33:18 +0000 UTC]

wow...

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-10-13 00:03:19 +0000 UTC]

...?

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brandi-dawn-777 In reply to awesomesauce [2003-10-14 02:53:09 +0000 UTC]

.... i dunno

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