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awesomesauce — longing for anti-reality
Published: 2003-10-14 08:44:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 18
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Description This endless reality
It swallows me up
And spits me out
Only to find I’m dreaming
But I fear waking
For the reality remains
And I want no part
In this cruel cruel world

But the reality remains
These pictures they taunt
This music it consumes me
It’s too much for these ears
These bottles are broken
Yet they keep on spinning
Turning and turning
And landing on me

So ill kiss these lips
They are so warm
Yet so cold

Yet it is not enough
I am not enough
For existence
For meaning
For love and hope
Yet I long it so

I feel it not
There’s never anything in return
I give and I give
Only longing but for to receive

But to be deceived
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Comments: 14

HollowAgain [2003-11-04 17:50:31 +0000 UTC]

I really like it... and I can REALLY relate.

--
"Can't rain all the time..."

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awesomesauce In reply to HollowAgain [2003-11-04 18:05:39 +0000 UTC]

i only speak the truth...

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brandi-dawn-777 [2003-10-16 19:26:47 +0000 UTC]

reality sux..

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-10-16 23:40:54 +0000 UTC]

si...

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lovelorn [2003-10-15 22:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Hi saucy love it

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awesomesauce In reply to lovelorn [2003-10-16 00:34:46 +0000 UTC]

u love it... hmmmm.yes.... yes....

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chaian [2003-10-14 09:10:31 +0000 UTC]

mmm... lots of emotion - but you force the words out... poetry can be written from the heart, but it's the mind that has to form it.

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awesomesauce In reply to chaian [2003-10-14 09:11:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you... true words... oh so tru

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chaian In reply to awesomesauce [2003-10-14 09:22:07 +0000 UTC]

shit - you were meant to be cut to the quick - hurt... my mean streak is melting!

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awesomesauce In reply to chaian [2003-10-14 09:25:16 +0000 UTC]

hey im a lover not a fighter... as you see through the poem...

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chaian In reply to awesomesauce [2003-10-14 09:36:02 +0000 UTC]

I suppose i can live without it...

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awesomesauce In reply to chaian [2003-10-14 17:54:44 +0000 UTC]

well than i guess im in debt to your life and must continue on creating this art we call poetry... eh???

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liondragon41 [2003-10-14 08:48:19 +0000 UTC]

*poke* I really love this.. *faves*

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awesomesauce In reply to liondragon41 [2003-10-14 08:50:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you ever so much

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