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awesomesauce — lying and dieing
Published: 2005-03-29 01:40:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 227; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description towards your heart
my lips to part
and at your shoulders
my eyes do rest

my ear does listen
to your lungs' collapse
from sigh to hum
and hum to sigh

exactly what i need to be
and this being where the end meets me
lying and dieing
as it should always be
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awesomesauce - arm+finger - foot+toe
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Srfgurl5 [2006-09-21 15:59:25 +0000 UTC]

U know u want me...
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aperfectfailure [2005-03-31 15:38:14 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful
u have such a way with words
its simplicity is also very strong
great work

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awesomesauce In reply to aperfectfailure [2005-03-31 18:34:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks, thats what i was going for.

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Srfgurl5 [2005-03-30 20:12:01 +0000 UTC]

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lipsxeyesxback [2005-03-29 04:27:23 +0000 UTC]

*sigh*.....this makes me feel....well, I won't tell you how it makes me feel. Its amazing though.

(I'm sorry i didn't call you love. I will soon)
::stares at you lovingly::

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Pertevivro [2005-03-29 01:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow....This is very deep...You sure everything is okay?

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