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awesomesauce — making believe
Published: 2004-07-20 18:46:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 20
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Description she dances in his presence
   fluttering in his laughter
      and not mine
she smiles at his songs of arrogance
   swayed in his eyes
      and not mine

can something
that never was yours in the first place
be stolen from you?
or do you not let go of the fact that
it never was your treasure to begin with

      letting go means
     realising youve failed
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brandi-dawn-777 [2004-08-31 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]

i completely agree with Srfgurl5..... those last lines!

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Srfgurl5 [2004-07-20 20:33:01 +0000 UTC]

BRAVO! " letting go means
realising youve failed"

awesome

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awesomesauce In reply to Srfgurl5 [2004-07-20 22:58:22 +0000 UTC]

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