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awesomesauce — needless suffering and death
Published: 2003-12-01 07:50:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 23
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Description you are all that you can be
your body wont give you a chance

to grow...
to live...
to be...

this blackness chokes you
taking what little breath you have

and you remain there

tired...
helpless...
hopless...

wishing only but to live

what most take advantage of
you fight to maintain
you strive to keep
to value life to such a degree borders all desire and longing

to remain poked and prodded
only to be kept alive

yet you chose your fate...

to live or not to live
that is the question

...to die...

to live is to die
those who live forever die alone
to die is to live
those who die together live forever
to love is to die
those who live without love are but mortals in captivity
to live is to love

love life
live the love
you loved to live...
living to love is loving to live
in loving we truly live
in loving... we die...
we kill ourselves...

why must you die...
have you loved so purely..
so greatly
so innocently as to not belong here?

why must you live, only to be tortured by this cruel fate
why must you die?
has fate bound your life to death
why must it grant it so soon...

yet death is inevitable

inevitability...
predestination...
uncertainty...

yet through and through
you remain strong...
you fight...
you fought..
you won...
you are brave...
you are strong...
you... were...
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Comments: 13

endofeternity [2003-12-09 04:52:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow...I know this feeling all too well and it's one of the worst.... have a and know that over a long time...things will ease up.

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awesomesauce In reply to endofeternity [2003-12-09 20:22:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks..

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mewaytoblay [2003-12-04 05:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Very moving. You have a nice way of putting the words together so that they flow in a powerful way. Wonderful job.

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awesomesauce In reply to mewaytoblay [2003-12-04 17:20:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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caput-draconis [2003-12-02 18:56:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm gobsmacked!!! This is really good! Serious!

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awesomesauce In reply to caput-draconis [2003-12-02 19:08:03 +0000 UTC]

tanx...

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dgabriele [2003-12-02 17:57:38 +0000 UTC]

ooo...*shivers* bravado... magnifico...muy bueno

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awesomesauce In reply to dgabriele [2003-12-02 18:31:47 +0000 UTC]

gracias...

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brandi-dawn-777 [2003-12-01 18:45:58 +0000 UTC]

wow you are great with words... and i love the way you wrote this it's amazing

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-12-01 22:41:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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awesomesauce In reply to brandi-dawn-777 [2003-12-01 21:21:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks.. i try i try....

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redness [2003-12-01 08:06:11 +0000 UTC]

I love your poetry sweetie, your so good with words I have a feeling i know where your coming from with this as i feel the same way about many things. fantastic work hun

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awesomesauce In reply to redness [2003-12-01 21:19:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you ever so much...

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